Monday, April 4, 2011

MAGPIE/ Prompt #60


                                     photo/ magpie tales/ tess kincaid


Can it be 60 Mags?  Back for more...thanks Tess!!


INFINITE RAIN

Each drop holds a soul.
There I am, infinite rain,
looking just like you.


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30 comments:

hedgewitch said...

Very nice, Lyn. A simple poem that, like life, is as easy or as hard as you want to make it. Enjoyed it very much.

Lyn said...

Hi hedgewitch-
This little poem sort of found me...Thanks!

Isabel Doyle said...

infinite rain - absolutely
good poem!

Lyn said...

Hi Isabel-
Thank you for your generous comment!!

Reflections said...

Simple, yet exquisite in its message. Beautiful piece.

turtlememoir said...

"Each drop holds a soul." I like that, the title, the 'I am you' sort of feel, in fact, everything about it. A beautifully complete haiku-moment.

Lyn said...

Hi Reflections-
So pleased that you liked this..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi turtlememoir-
I find that the haiku is a form that always surprises me! Thank you..

Kristen Haskell said...

That took my breath away. Each drop holds a soul, wonderful really..

Lyn said...

Hi Kristen-
I really thank you for your lovely comment..

Olivia said...

Very serene and enchanting.. The words poured on me with so much beauty!

Since I like rains, infinite rains made a lot of sense to me.. :)
Hugs xx

Tess Kincaid said...

I so often identify with rain.

Lyn said...

Hi Olivia-
Lovely sentiment..I like rain, especially when it breaks a heat wave..Thank you...

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
I too love weather that is "Alive"! But this past winter had too much of that lively white stuff!!

Steve Isaak said...

Solid, striking work. Good stuff.

Lyn said...

Hi Steve-
Thanks for visiting and for your supportive words!!

Carrie Burtt said...

A glorious poem Lyn....i love it!!
:-)

Deedee said...

Beautiful! Simply said and heartfelt.

Lyn said...

Hi Carrie-
Thank you...a wonderful comment!

Lyn said...

Hi Deedee-
Welcome back..so good to hear from you..thank you so much for the comment!!

Trellissimo said...

Short but Oh So Sweet!

Lyn said...

Hi Trellissimo-
As is your lovely comment!! thanks...

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely! Makes me feel refreshed!

Anna :o]

Lyn said...

Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
thanks so much for visiting..ah, yes, the pause that....

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, yes! One of many - A delightful read...

Jingle said...

This is super cute...

simple line, divine tale.

Lyn said...

Hi Tumblewords-
Always good to hear nice words ..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Lovely to hear from you..thanks so much!

Steve Isaak said...

Fine versifyin' - cuts to it.

Lyn said...

Hi Steve-
So nice to hear from you..Thanks!!

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