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SKILL
It's a skill, my father said,
as he engraved,
with fastidious dignity,
the formal letters
on the headstone.
We have done so in our family
since Pope Clement
avoided the plague.
I accepted that I had a talent
with granite,
a serenity
when I grasped the rondel
to carve an angel
on the stone,
then chisel an inventory
of Gothic letters
to mark the day.
Flesh and bones
already boxed and banded,
set below,
sealed in midnight forever.
Time begins a silent race
and who's to know
if stone or bones
will be the first
to crumble into dust.
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Another of the weekly challenges from Magpie Prompts..and indeed it was!! This has brought out the best..please check all the participants!
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47 comments:
A great perspective on our creative vitality and mortality.
"Sealed in midnight forever." Fine writing.
Hi Paul-
Thank you so much..I strongly felt the presence of creativity and mortality...
Hi Berowne-
I so appreciate your encouraging words..thanks!
This is really good. I mean REALLY good.
Beautifully written! I was stuck on every word!
Great perspective! Artists who inscribe the head stones of the final resting place have quite an honor.
Hi Doctor FTSE-
Thanks..I certainly appreciate your comment!
Hi Diane T-
So glad to hear from you..more than kind!!
Hi Everyday Goddess-
That certainly seems true..such a special thing to do..thanks!
Who's 2 know indeed.
ADORABLE AND INTERESTING! SELAED IN
sweet and smart,
Glad to hear your father's words.
well done.
Hi Kathi-
Thank you..and of course it doesn't matter!!
Hi Michael-
Nice thing to say..thank you!
Hi Jingle-
Glad you like my fictional father's words..all for poetry! Thanks...
An elegant offering...beautifully done.
Well put.
I particularly like "and who's to know if stones or bones will be the first to crumble..."
This is fabulous, Lyn. I love it!
Good grief! What a fantastic poem... and what an ending. Thanks for sharing!
Hi Derrick-
Welcome back!! And thanks for the wonderful comment..poems show up!
I loved the imagery..."a talent with granite".
Obviously, a talent for writing too.
a well-honed poem - loved the question in the final stanza - who knows, indeed?
A strong authentic voice and a powerful representation of the mason's relationship with his craft.
I've always been fascinated with the craft of the stone mason. Excellent piece, Lyn. I loved this.
Hi Jinksy-
Lovely comments like yours are what urge me on...thank you!!
Hi Kay-
Thanks for visiting and for your very nice comment!
Hi daddywasa....
What a great name and what a wonderful comment!! Thank you...
Hi Talon-
I will keep plugging away, comments like yours, so welcome!!
Hi gospelwriter-
Good to hear from you, I too like unsolvable questions!!
Hi Dick-
Thank you...I had to do a bit of research for this one...but I love research!!
Hi Willow-
Just looking at the letters on your photo brought this on..that's how it seems to work for me..keep 'em coming!! And..thank you!
"..Flesh and bones
already boxed and banded,
set below,
sealed in midnight forever.." Excellent.
ah you get to write the last word on teh life that now lays there...then lay down their pen...
Hi Martin H-
So good to hear from you and your lovely comment...thanks!
Hi Brian-
Brian, is there really a last word for writers?? Hope you haven't had yours yet!! Always great to hear from you...
Lovely imagery Lyn... loved the last line,stone or bones which one dust first...
Hi Abhilasha-
I appreciate your generous words..thanks so much!
An exceptionally fine poem!
Cool! I loved this one!!
Hi Tumblewords-
Very nice to hear from you, and thanks!
Hi Shigune-
So glad you enjoyed this..Thank you!!
Lyn, your poetry is always so vivid and well done. I am in awe. Do you publish anywhere? You should get them published.
Hi Angie-
Thank you for the encouraging words..I do have a book..TWO GHOSTS/poems/Lyn Rochelle.
amazon.com
Love to write..don't much care for the business part!!
Hi Jingle-
The most generous gestures from you, always..thanks so much!
One of the most unique interpretations of Willow's photo! I so enjoyed this ..........
Hi Helen
I don't know where this came from. Deep inside , I guess!! Thanks so much!
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