Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Hawk....



HAIKU

My soul a feather
of the white hawk that defends
a full, drumming heart.


This is my first submission to One Shot Wednesday.  Anything that gets me to write more poetry is OK in my book.  So thanks to those who clued me in. Will try to make you proud.  And bloggers, this site's for you!!  Go to the One Shot site for details, please...


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26 comments:

Ben Langhinrchs said...

Nice job with the haiku. There is plenty of bad haiku out there (I write some myself), so it is a pleasure to read a good one. Welcome to One Shot.

Everyday Goddess said...

beautiful connections, one shot wednesday is very fun!

dustus said...

Elements of a musical heart, nature, and soul. Cool Haiku.

Brian Miller said...

nice. great to see you at one shot lyn, used to popping in on the magpie trail....

keep defending that heart...nice write.

Blue Sky Dreaming said...

Felt it all the way to my bones...good writing for sure!!

Desert Rose said...

that haiku is just too beautiful! touched my soul..:)

Lyn said...

Hi Ben-
What a nice welcome..I look forward to reading your haiku! Thank you...

Lyn said...

Hi Everyday Goddess-
So nice to see you here..lovely to meet old friends!!

Lyn said...

Hi dustus-
I guess we're all a bit complex..thanks for the insight!

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Thanks for your welcome..spotted your name and said, this must be the place to be!!

Lyn said...

Hi Mary Ann-
Always happy to see that I have a positive effect..thanks so much!

Lyn said...

Hi Desert Rose-
Who could ask for more? I so appreciate your kind words...

liv2write2day said...

Congrats on a lovely haiku and your first one shot.
Victoria

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous!

Derrick said...

Is there no end to your talent Ms.R?! Keep on drumming.

Shashi said...

what a beautiful image that you have crated with your Haiku...

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Eric Alder said...

Saying more with less is always a challenge, which you met so wonderfully with this One Shot haiku.

(I'm a fan of the 5-7-5 form and have an unconventional blog: Haiku Koo-Koo)

Lyn said...

Hi Victoria-
I do indeed feel welcomed..thank you so much!

Lyn said...

Hi Mama Zen-
What a nice thing to say!!

Lyn said...

Hi Derrick-
I do sort of turn up, don't I? End to my talent...aaargghhh...

Lyn said...

Hi Shashi-
Love haiku..the fewer the words, the more we have to tell the truth..thank you..
Namaste'

Lyn said...

Hi Eric-
Thanks so much..can't wait to visit your very original sounding Blog!!

Jeane said...

what a strong picture - wonderful :)

Lyn said...

Hi Jeane-
Always a pleasure to hear from you..thanks!

Wild Rose said...

Beautiful haiku and nice oneshot..

Lyn said...

Hi Wild Rose-
Thank you..I so enjoyed doing this!

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