HAIKU
My soul a feather
of the white hawk that defends
a full, drumming heart.
This is my first submission to One Shot Wednesday. Anything that gets me to write more poetry is OK in my book. So thanks to those who clued me in. Will try to make you proud. And bloggers, this site's for you!! Go to the One Shot site for details, please...
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25 comments:
Nice job with the haiku. There is plenty of bad haiku out there (I write some myself), so it is a pleasure to read a good one. Welcome to One Shot.
beautiful connections, one shot wednesday is very fun!
Elements of a musical heart, nature, and soul. Cool Haiku.
nice. great to see you at one shot lyn, used to popping in on the magpie trail....
keep defending that heart...nice write.
Felt it all the way to my bones...good writing for sure!!
that haiku is just too beautiful! touched my soul..:)
Hi Ben-
What a nice welcome..I look forward to reading your haiku! Thank you...
Hi Everyday Goddess-
So nice to see you here..lovely to meet old friends!!
Hi dustus-
I guess we're all a bit complex..thanks for the insight!
Hi Brian-
Thanks for your welcome..spotted your name and said, this must be the place to be!!
Hi Mary Ann-
Always happy to see that I have a positive effect..thanks so much!
Hi Desert Rose-
Who could ask for more? I so appreciate your kind words...
Congrats on a lovely haiku and your first one shot.
Victoria
Is there no end to your talent Ms.R?! Keep on drumming.
what a beautiful image that you have crated with your Haiku...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Saying more with less is always a challenge, which you met so wonderfully with this One Shot haiku.
(I'm a fan of the 5-7-5 form and have an unconventional blog: Haiku Koo-Koo)
Hi Victoria-
I do indeed feel welcomed..thank you so much!
Hi Mama Zen-
What a nice thing to say!!
Hi Derrick-
I do sort of turn up, don't I? End to my talent...aaargghhh...
Hi Shashi-
Love haiku..the fewer the words, the more we have to tell the truth..thank you..
Namaste'
Hi Eric-
Thanks so much..can't wait to visit your very original sounding Blog!!
what a strong picture - wonderful :)
Hi Jeane-
Always a pleasure to hear from you..thanks!
Beautiful haiku and nice oneshot..
Hi Wild Rose-
Thank you..I so enjoyed doing this!
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