Tuesday, October 5, 2010
Fire/ Aries...
ARIES
Coated by winter's demise,
three inches of snow
can't halt the impertinence of daffodils
pushing to stand on earth
made virgin again.
Renaissance in the garden
is a holiday for Aries.
A promise carried on the air,
a trace of green to sniff as hope,
to live anew
no matter what the year collected.
Aries discards history
with a snap so sharp
that the past is not only over and done,
but resting in winter's crypt.
At the vernal turn,
trust without end,
a blade of grass,
a childlike laugh,
once more to cross
the threshold into spring.
Inspired to join Jingle Poetry, Monday Poetry Potluck, with this week's theme...Fire, Water, Earth, Air...I chose Fire..pretty easy for an Aries. This poem was originally published in my book of poetry, Two Ghosts, seemed to be just what I was looking for. Hope you enjoy this and the many other poems that have been presented because of Jingle's blog. Well done, one and all!
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16 comments:
stunning fire poem, lynn,
love the winter image along with birth of new life sentiment...
Thank you for the beautiful poetry!
Glad to see you at poetry potluck,
your fire image is cool...
your words are elegant in view..
Happy Tuesday!
Cheers!
I love the feeling of Aries energy, you captured it so well. Lovely banner picture too.
Each line has beautiful images, really excellent!
Hi Jingle-
Thanks for the great opportunity..really liked doing this!
Hi Jingle-
Happy Tuesday to you..you made my day!
Hi Everyday Goddess-
Thank you so much..one Aries thing I've got..enthusiasm!
Thought I had a touch of déjà vu, Lyn! Not fair making us long for Spring just yet though!
Fire! a joy to read...especially for a Leo!
I like the astrological angle on the elements...wonderful poem!
http://itslovelyannie.com/2010/10/04/elemental/
http://itslovelyannie.com/2010/10/05/heroines-journey/
Hi Derrick-
Deja vu, all over again! Springtime in my mind, can't help it..
Hi jStar-
Thank you!!
Hi Lovely Annie-
Thanks so much..Leo, eye to eye!!
Very well versed poetry and I enjoyed reading it.. thanks
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Hi Shashi-
So glad you liked the poem..Thanks for visiting..
Om Nama Shivaya
Stunning for me to read since I am an Aries xx Thanks for linking with Potluck xx
Hi Amanda-
Love to hear from Aries! Thank you...
nicely done!
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