FALLING AGAIN
Fell in love with a
blackbird. Bent his wings round my
body. Talons clinch.
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22 comments:
PBS had a Nature show all about the blackbird or crow which I was sorry to have missed as I find them fascinating.
These words speak of falling again speak on so many levels....!
Hi Mary Ann-
I saw the PBS show on crows a couple of years ago..made quite an impression..such superior intelligence..maybe in my next life!!
Thanks...
Nice piece, Lyn.
that's cute,
I see the bending in your words.
powerful love.
Hi Eric-
Thanks..glad you liked this little poem!
Hi Jingle-
Always appreciate your thoughtful words!
Loved it and well penned my friend x
those talons will get you every time...smiles.
Hi buttercup-
Thank you..glad you liked it!!
Hi Brian-
Yes, but one gets used to them!!haha...
Lovely Haiku...I hope the talons didn't clinch too tightly. Nice Potluck :)
oooh I like this so much!
Talons clinch indeed!
Hi tracyhsays-
Thanks so much for stopping by! Ah, love, a little pain....
Hi kathew-
Thank you...hard to get some action in a haiku!!
Hello Lyn
Beautiful mag 37 -- Lyn , capturing the essence of this blackbird, love the idea of it wrapping around you, gives it a soulful touch, similar to mythology or indigenous folklore. The Mosaic is a nice work of art, love the details and the colors of the tiles.
Cheers,
joanny
clinch..to fasten firmly together....you asked for it falling in love with a blackbird...you lucky gal
sounds like a match
loved it
Hi joanny-
Thanks..I liked the mosaic so much..it just fit! Also the blackbird..my kind of guy!!
Hi Suz-
If I'm going to have a fantasy..it's going to be a FANTASY!!
scary feeling!!!
Pretty nice post, Lyn
Hi lynnaima-
Thanks for visiting...happy it was scary!!
Hi vibacu-
Welcome...and thank you!!
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