Monday, October 25, 2010

Falling Again...

                            Blackbird Flying Over the Delta/ Mosaic/ Joe Moorman



FALLING AGAIN

Fell in love with a
blackbird.  Bent his wings round my
body.  Talons clinch.


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23 comments:

Blue Sky Dreaming said...

PBS had a Nature show all about the blackbird or crow which I was sorry to have missed as I find them fascinating.
These words speak of falling again speak on so many levels....!

Lyn said...

Hi Mary Ann-
I saw the PBS show on crows a couple of years ago..made quite an impression..such superior intelligence..maybe in my next life!!
Thanks...

Eric Alder said...

Nice piece, Lyn.

Jingle said...

that's cute,
I see the bending in your words.
powerful love.

Lyn said...

Hi Eric-
Thanks..glad you liked this little poem!

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Always appreciate your thoughtful words!

buttercup said...

Loved it and well penned my friend x

Brian Miller said...

those talons will get you every time...smiles.

Lyn said...

Hi buttercup-
Thank you..glad you liked it!!

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Yes, but one gets used to them!!haha...

tracyhsays.com said...

Lovely Haiku...I hope the talons didn't clinch too tightly. Nice Potluck :)

kathew said...

oooh I like this so much!
Talons clinch indeed!

Lyn said...

Hi tracyhsays-
Thanks so much for stopping by! Ah, love, a little pain....

Lyn said...

Hi kathew-
Thank you...hard to get some action in a haiku!!

joanny said...

Hello Lyn

Beautiful mag 37 -- Lyn , capturing the essence of this blackbird, love the idea of it wrapping around you, gives it a soulful touch, similar to mythology or indigenous folklore. The Mosaic is a nice work of art, love the details and the colors of the tiles.

Cheers,
joanny

Suz said...

clinch..to fasten firmly together....you asked for it falling in love with a blackbird...you lucky gal
sounds like a match
loved it

Lyn said...

Hi joanny-
Thanks..I liked the mosaic so much..it just fit! Also the blackbird..my kind of guy!!

Lyn said...

Hi Suz-
If I'm going to have a fantasy..it's going to be a FANTASY!!

lynnaima said...

scary feeling!!!

vibaku said...

Pretty nice post, Lyn

Lyn said...

Hi lynnaima-
Thanks for visiting...happy it was scary!!

Lyn said...

Hi vibacu-
Welcome...and thank you!!

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/

please vote for fellow posts,
you are nominated, you win one vote, if you vote for other poets, you win another vote.

upon join the voting, you win at least a runner up award .
Thanks for the attention.

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