It's true. It's real.
born in a bed of dares,so true,amazing magpie.
Hi Natalie- Thanks so much for your comment..quite a pic to be inspired by!!
You did pretty good with this prompt...nice
Ooooh Lyn that is one special poem!
Hi Suz- Many thanks for your kind words...
Hi Isabel- It was a startling photo...went right to my unconscious! Thanks...
I like that "lie entwined" - ooh, and the "sticks of charcoal" - very nice!Bringing the soul into it just caps it off. There is vehemence in this! (Read it three times.)
A breathtaking write Lyn....you have a wonderful talent! :-)
Oh gosh Lyn, this is so fresh and original! I love the opening lines,'...born/ in a bed of dares.' And, I think this is the only poem I have read that shows the sameness and connection of the figures, rather than their difference. How very cool. Strong closing stanza too.
Hi Tumblewords- What a lovely word! Thanks...
Hi Kat- Maybe we should read everything 3 times..I like that!! Thank you...
Hi Carrie- I'm humbled by your words..can't thank you enough!!
Hi Laurie- Deeply appreciate your comment...wow!and thanks...
Hi Other Mary- Very interesting...maybe I sort of think that nothing is separate..and we're still at Alpha. Thanks...
i love the opening linehaunting suppleness
Hi zongrik- Thank you, m'dear!
Born in a bed of dares? Wow!
Hi Tess- Guess I was inspired once more...thank you!!
Love what you did with the photograph ..
You do have that Magpie knack, Lyn. Never disappoint. Love this!
Hi Helen- Yes, quite a photo..thanks for your comment..
Hi Helena- I am sort of hooked on this method..one of these days I'll start thinking for myself again!!Thanks..
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