It's true. It's real.
such power in a short verse...brilliant.
This is a great short poem. Truly amazing.
WOW. Evey word packs a punch, the last line a crescendo!
so perfectly simple...
Hi David Allen Waters- Thank you so much..there is that haiku challenge that I love!
Hi verseinanutshell- I really appreciate you comment..thanks!
Hi roughwaterjohn- Really so nice of you to visit and comment...thanks!
Hi Evelyn- Thanks for the lovely comment...
Powerful stuff - your message is clear.
That last line gives the haiku it's punch. Nice write!http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/dark-eyes/
Hi poetry-diary- Thanks for your generous thought...
Hi Jessica- Nice ..haiku is such a great discipline!
Oh, you did wonderful!Love it, Lyn.
I love this! Sun in triumph!
Hi Margie- Lovely..thank you so much!!
super compact and wise.well done.
you are true to the sun -- powerful :)
Hi honeyhaiku- Thanks for you comment..I appreciate it!
Hi Jingle- Thanks..I like to try a haiku now and then...
Hi bendedspoon- Lovely comment...thanks!
Short but powerful! (sort of like my husband!)
Hi Lolamouse- The best kind! Thanks so much!
Your well-measured words said it all, my dear.. that was a certain ROOAAARR!! Loved this!
Hi Kavita- Thank you for your kind words...
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