Sunday, May 15, 2011

POWER/ Poetry Potluck #35

 
                                                                  Bodiam Castle


I WAS CHARMED by the idea of this week's Poetry Potluck #35Fortresses, Castles, Palaces and Royal Houses!  Bound to be intriguing...

POWER

You are a fortress.
The mighty build a deep moat,
but I am the Sun.

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24 comments:

David Allen Waters said...

such power in a short verse...brilliant.

verseinanutshell said...

This is a great short poem. Truly amazing.

roughwaterjohn said...

WOW. Evey word packs a punch, the last line a crescendo!

Evelyn said...

so perfectly simple...

Lyn said...

Hi David Allen Waters-
Thank you so much..there is that haiku challenge that I love!

Lyn said...

Hi verseinanutshell-
I really appreciate you comment..thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi roughwaterjohn-
Really so nice of you to visit and comment...thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Evelyn-
Thanks for the lovely comment...

poetry-diary.com said...

Powerful stuff - your message is clear.

jessicasjapes said...

That last line gives the haiku it's punch. Nice write!

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/dark-eyes/

Lyn said...

Hi poetry-diary-
Thanks for your generous thought...

Lyn said...

Hi Jessica-
Nice ..haiku is such a great discipline!

Margie said...

Oh, you did wonderful!
Love it, Lyn.

honeyhaiku said...

I love this! Sun in triumph!

Lyn said...

Hi Margie-
Lovely..thank you so much!!

Jingle said...

super compact and wise.
well done.

bendedspoon said...

you are true to the sun -- powerful :)

Lyn said...

Hi honeyhaiku-
Thanks for you comment..I appreciate it!

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Thanks..I like to try a haiku now and then...

Lyn said...

Hi bendedspoon-
Lovely comment...thanks!

Lolamouse said...

Short but powerful! (sort of like my husband!)

Lyn said...

Hi Lolamouse-
The best kind! Thanks so much!

Kavita said...

Your well-measured words said it all, my dear.. that was a certain ROOAAARR!!

Loved this!

Lyn said...

Hi Kavita-
Thank you for your kind words...

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