Sunday, May 1, 2011

OUT OF THE BLUE/ Poetry Potluck #33



THIS WEEK'S Poetry Potluck #33, presents us with the opportunity to deal with our Doubts, Fears, Inhibitions and Hesitations.  What weighs me down the most?  I hesitate to tell you...


OUT OF THE BLUE

A friend schedules a seance.
I'm the ghost.
I come through
but it's Greek to me.

That makes two of us
who wonder
what my spirit is up to.

I fear my soul
may have
a separate language,
and it's one
I do not speak.

Out of the blue
I start scattering
tittle-tattle,
revealing secrets,

and everyone
gets the message
but me,

because I still
haven't learned
the true
heart to heart
of Heaven.


copyright/ all rights reserved/ 2011


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16 comments:

Jingle said...

life is a learning journey,
you are ahead of many,
keep the course sailing.

Love your entry,
A++

:)
Bless your talent.

Hope said...

yes, I can understand how that could be a genuine fear.  a frightening thought very well expressed! :)

loved it!
thank you

lunawitch15 said...

a truly remarkable write! thank you!

Luna

WyomingDiva said...

You describe well that sometime- disconnect between spirit and self.

jessicasjapes said...

Nice twist on the ghost idea. like it!

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/darkly-imagined/

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Blessings to you too, my friend! And many thanks for the opportunities...

Lyn said...

Hi Hope-
Thanks for your special words!

Lyn said...

Hi lunawitch15-
I'm grateful for your words..thank you!!

Lyn said...

Hi WyomingDiva-
Welcome and thank you..it's that disconnect that gets us!!

Lyn said...

Hi Jessica-
Thank you..me and ghosts, huh??

bendedspoon said...

great write! one speaks the language of truth and I fear the other is not, from my own experience. Huggs :)

thingy said...

What a clever write, Lyn. Loved it.

Lyn said...

Hi bendedspoon-
I agree with you, and appreciate your comment...thanks...

Lyn said...

Hi thingy-
So glad you did! Thanks so much!

abthomas said...

A fantastic write and the image choice is outstanding!

Lyn said...

Hi abthomas-
I really appreciate your terrific comment..thanks!!!

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