LA JUMENT/ photo/ Jean Guichard
THANK YOU, Tess...for Magpie Tales....
FRENZY
Right into the roiling pot,
into the mouth of the whirlpool,
pasta will meet its destiny.
The water parts
like a biblical sea.
A salty reception
whips onto a frenzy,
as strands of lean beauties,
straight as straw,
fold into a fated
al dente perfection.
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18 comments:
Very creative and innovative. Well written. I'll have mine ala puttanesca, please...
Hi Berowne-
You picked the specialty of the house...!!Thanks so much...
I appreciate the destiny of pasta. Yummy poem!
Hi ~T~
Not a bad fate! Thank you!!
Delicious! Love your unique take, Lyn...
Hi Tess-
More sauce, dear? Thanks...
A salty reception whips onto a frenzy..a great description of the whirling waters.
How delicious, you had me in a frenzy right from the pot to the table.
Hi Truedessa-
Thank you...glad you enjoyed my frenzy!!
Hi Karen S-
Pasta is always a destination for me..thanks!!
Stunning images, bold approach, frenzy of emotions/digested...
Happy new year, good lady, this is so aromic, you know you shouldnt drop acid while you cook dinner for the extended family...l.naughty !
Hi humbird-
Thanks so much..frenzy of emotions..yes!!
Hi Kutamun-
Just a little help from my friends! Thanks and Happy New Year to you too...
What a clever take on the prompt, Lyn. Truly refreshing!
This is so good that it's making me hungry! You are creative!
Hi Helena-
Thank you..so glad you enjoyed this...
Hi Belva Rae-
What a nice thing to say...thank you!
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