Monday, January 13, 2014

MAGPIE...Prompt #202


                                                     LA JUMENT/ photo/ Jean Guichard


THANK YOU, Tess...for Magpie Tales....


FRENZY

Right into the roiling pot,
into the mouth of the whirlpool,
pasta will meet its destiny.

The water parts
like a biblical sea.

A salty reception
whips onto a frenzy,

as strands of lean beauties,
straight as straw,

fold into a fated
al dente perfection.


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18 comments:

Berowne said...

Very creative and innovative. Well written. I'll have mine ala puttanesca, please...

Lyn said...

Hi Berowne-
You picked the specialty of the house...!!Thanks so much...

~T~ said...

I appreciate the destiny of pasta. Yummy poem!

Lyn said...

Hi ~T~
Not a bad fate! Thank you!!

Tess Kincaid said...

Delicious! Love your unique take, Lyn...

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
More sauce, dear? Thanks...

Truedessa said...

A salty reception whips onto a frenzy..a great description of the whirling waters.

Karen S. said...

How delicious, you had me in a frenzy right from the pot to the table.

Lyn said...

Hi Truedessa-
Thank you...glad you enjoyed my frenzy!!

Lyn said...

Hi Karen S-
Pasta is always a destination for me..thanks!!

humbird said...

Stunning images, bold approach, frenzy of emotions/digested...

Kutamun said...

Happy new year, good lady, this is so aromic, you know you shouldnt drop acid while you cook dinner for the extended family...l.naughty !

Lyn said...

Hi humbird-
Thanks so much..frenzy of emotions..yes!!

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
Just a little help from my friends! Thanks and Happy New Year to you too...

Helena said...

What a clever take on the prompt, Lyn. Truly refreshing!

Belva Rae Staples said...

This is so good that it's making me hungry! You are creative!

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
Thank you..so glad you enjoyed this...

Lyn said...

Hi Belva Rae-
What a nice thing to say...thank you!

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