Sunday, December 29, 2013
MAGPIE...Prompt #200
SELF PORTRAIT/ Francis Bacon
THANK YOU , Tess...for all the Mags...at Magpie Tales
BEFORE THE MURDER
This is me in front of the door,
the one where ghosts hesitate to glide,
and you said that was my portal of passage.
Little did I know.
Remember the day i plunged down the stairs,
and you said what more?
As if you had been hurt, not I?
Don't wish me bad I said,
but you laughed and whispered,
kill you most likely.
What more can befall me,
paintings building up in the corner,
stains bleeding onto the canvas,
sited where pain was lodged.
You want to know
how much will they pay
for the further torture of your eyes.
I didn't mean for my art to please,
I didn't mean for my life to please.
I should have embraced, "smile please,"
instead of painting hell stinging the canvas,
the snake of Eden slithering out of the tube.
Now you see me with my soul intact,
before you struck your blow,
and couldn't tell that I was smiling.
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22 comments:
oh man- this is an amazing poem to read...and to me it's very painful for the soul who wrote it.
Hi Kathe W.-
Such an interesting comment..glad to say no pain at all...but real empathy... and I like my fantasies! Thank you and best wishes!!
Expertly inventive; beautifully written.
Hi Berowne-
Thank you so much...very nice...this poem was out there, waiting for me..ha...Best wishes for the New Year!!
A chilling tale sparked from a bland photo...
Hi Jinksy-
Thanks...for me Bacon always morphs into that state of mind...
Best!!
layered and provocative ~ M
Sound with such fleur of intimacy and passion! You went within their bond, if I could say...:) Happy New Year, Lyn!
this is a very cool write...it hits us with the unexpected....the pay for the torture of the eyes....the never meaning for the life to please, the art to please...i found that part quite evocative...
Several years ago I slipped and broke my foot in the portal area of Willow Manor...what is it with these ghosts...
Wow, interesting take on the prompt,
dark & haunting.
Hi grapeling-
So happy to welcome you..and thanks so much!
Hi humbird-
I like what you said..I did go within their bond...Thanks..
Hi Brian-
That Bacon..he always shakes me up..thanks for the succinct comment...and best for the New Year...
Hi Tess-
You came to the right person...next time, open the door first! ha...
More power to you!
Hi Truedessa-
As can be seen, Bacon does grab me..thanks so much!
Wow - I feel like this could be a movie.
Hi Other Mary-
Now if we could only get Scorcese to direct..thanks and best wishes!
Lyn, I so enjoy your writing ... Happy New Year!
Hi Helen-
How kind of you..thanks..and a very Happy New Year to you!
Ooh, chilling! Happy new year!
Hi ~T~
Oh, thank you..just what I want! Best and Happy New Year!!
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