photo/ willow/ Magpie Tales #44
SLEIGH RIDE
It looked like a hill to me,
a cement sidewalk slanting down to Lydig.
In the summertime I skated
beside the apartment buildings,
starting atop Brady Av,
speeding along Wallace,
passing my building on the corner,
and stopping to unbuckle my skates
for an ice cream when I reached Good Humor.
The metal wheels came to a stop
when I fell or bumped into one of the old ladies
folding her wooden chair,
even sometimes my very own grandmother,
chair in hand yelling, you're going to kill yourself,
who goes so fast, are you crazy?
All in English and Russian and
what was she talking about?
But when the snow piled on the sidewalk,
just around THE HOLIDAYS!!
I pulled my sled out of the creepy storage bin
in the basement of my building,
heard a noise that sounded
like my heart beat
in that pile of Mama's junk.
I grabbed the wooden sled,
caught a splinter right away,
sucked the blood and spit it out,
pulled my Flyer into snowy daylight,
to the top of the hill, my winter paradise,
and away I went, no old ladies in my way,
all sitting at their windows
sipping a glass of hot tea.
maybe dreaming of a sleigh ride
that took them to streets paved with gold,
the way I am today,
and never coming back
once I hit the first star.
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Thanks, once again, Willow, for lighting my fire!! Poetry lives!! Magpie, forever!!
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47 comments:
Love this Lyn! I love the feeling of freedom and nexcitement! And the last part is perfect!
Lyn, Your Magpie is alive with sounds, sights, smells, emotions, memories, pain, laughing, yearning ~ I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Hi Raph-
So happy to hear from you..I really felt close to this one!! Thanks!!
Hi Helen-
Glad you enjoyed this..it was a blast for me! Thank you...
Beautiful poem. Honest, direct, and heartfelt. Your street is vivid in my mind. It put a smile on my face and warmth in my heart.
Thank you.
Ps. How do you feel about Mozart? :)
You rally are a menace! Loved the images of careless and the feeling of total abandon but please, "who goes so fast, are you crazy?"
Stay safe for Magpie 45.
what a fun read! Love the last few lines!
Beautiful. Really, just beautiful.
Hi Daigu-
What a wonderful thing to say..I really appreciate it!
Mozart?? This guy has a future!
Hi Stafford-
Well, aren't you nice! Not so fast, anymore..not to worry! Thanks...
Hi kathew-
How nice that you enjoyed this..it was such fun for me too!
Hi Leah-
Thanks for your lovely words!
Hi Lyn,
Such a free spirit - your joy is infectious! Spare a thought for those old ladies!
Hi Derrick-
That's what they mean by the good old days...Now I'm one of those "ladies"..Thanks!!
ah, lovely memories of youth - reads like a story... now I remember, our sled was a Flyer too, wooden, with splinters practically everywhere you touched it
Hi gospelwriter-
Thanks..Funny about those splinters..still, those were the best sleds!!
What afun picture you paint with your words.
Hi Kristen-
Thank you..and I had fun doing it!!
The thrill of the ride, no matter what gets in the way. Let's hit it!
She must've been a real terror on those skates and equally on the sleigh i just felt the freedom of both in my vivid mind's eye.
sitting at their windows
sipping a glass of hot tea.
I'll join them! :)
Hi Reflections-
Fear not...Glad to report that no little old ladies ever fell!!
Thanks for the visit!
Hi Windsmoke-
She was just a skinny little girl from the Bronx who made a mountain out of a molehill!! Thanks...
Hi Trellissimo-
Thanks for visiting..yes, the tea at the window sounds just about right for now!!
What images, sounds, and so vivid!
Great Magpie!
who hid that story for us to find
Hi gautami tripathy-
Some things are always there..thank you so much!
oooh! rush of excitement from reading this lovely account!!
Hi Everyday Goddess-
So glad you got a rush!! Thank you...
hope you well..
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love the flow, ending seems divine.
this is fabulous lyn...hit that star...smiles.
Hi Jingle-
Thanks so much for your kind words and your lovely offers!!
Hi Brian-
Hope it isn't too late to be starstruck..thanks for the encouragement!!
Great finish, lovely sweeping sense of freedom and youth. Liked it very much, as always, Lyn.
Love the breathless feeling and the pinging off the star rush - delightful!
Hi hedgewitch-
Grateful for your comments....this was a fun ride for me!!
Hi Tumblewords-
Happy that you enjoyed this..it was one that seemed to race along!!
Gorgeous Magpie, how brave we were when we were little.
Hi Brigid-
Thank you so much..it's only in childhood that we know we'll always be fine!!
I love your Grandmother...
We al feel indesructable when we are kids... and kids at heart!
Hi Steve-
Thank you...Gran..she always looked out for me in every way...That's what they do!! Thank goodness we can remember..
Love the spirit of freedom in this one Lyn....a truly wonderful Magpie! :-)
'heard a noise that sounded
like my heart beat...' You capture the emotional connection with the sled so well.
Hi Carrie-
What a lovely thing to say!! Thank you...
Hi Paul C-
I didn't know I had this connection till I started to write!! Thanks
Such great and familiar imagery. You nailed it. Always a little bit of danger in sledding, isn't that why we loved it so?
Hi C. Hummel-
Thank you so much..I sort of did feel the wind rushing by when I did this!!
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