FIRST
First to hear my plea.
First to touch the Blessed Babe.
Mary, light my days.
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Thank you Willow, for this lovely Prompt...looking forward to reading all the other writers!!
One and all...the best Holiday season!!
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38 comments:
lovely-Merry Christmas to you
Simple and splendid, Lyn. A prayer, a petition and praise in one.
Kat
Hi kathew-
Thank you...I did like doing this..Merry Christmas!
Hi Kat-
Thank you..so glad it turned out that way!!
A good Prayer in Haiku form done very well!!
Hi Nanka-
Thank you..I do like the Haiku form so much!
Lyn,
Short and sweet, how nice? Merry Christmas
Your haiku is as lovely as your blog header photo!
Merry Christmas, Lyn.
Lovely Haiku :)
cheers
Very beautiful - Merry Christmas!
You know, Lyn, I didn't see the haiku, only the beautiful, beautiful simplicity.
Mary light my days
such wonderful line -
this is poem to carry
Fantastic Haiku short and sweet, straight to the point. Merry Christmas.
Hi kaykuala-
Yes, sometimes short does it! Thanks..
Hi Helen-
So glad you enjoyed both..Merry Christmas!
Hi Gabriela-
I appreciate your kind words..thanks!
Hi Kristen-
How nice..I loved doing this one!
Merry Christmas!
Hi Derrick-
I guess the form really doesn't matter here..I did feel this one...thank you!
Hi Words A Day-
So glad you feel this way..I'm grateful..
Hi Windsmoke-
Thank you for your visit and kind words..Merry Christmas!
powerful words...
Merry Christmas!
Elegant, Lyn. Merry Christmas, my friend. xx
Lovely haiku Lyn, simple and says it all.
Happy holidays!
very nice...simple yet pleading...mary christmas...smiles.
Hi Tess-
Your prompts carry me to new heights..Merry Christmas!
Hi Jane-
I'm learning about brevity!! Thank you so much...have a great Holiday!!
Hi Brian-
Thank you..always pleased by your visit!! Happy Holidays..
Beautiful!
Hi Tumblewords-
Thanks for your visit and comment!
A beautiful and oddly complex poem.
Merry Christmas, Lyn.
Hi Daigu-
Maybe not as simple as I thought..thank you..and a Merry Christmas to you too...
Succinct, and simply beautiful!!! A lovely Magpie!
May your days always be lit, my friend...
Hi Kavita-
Lovely comment..and best wishes to you for the Holidays!!
Lyn,
She has answered many a prayer; figuratively and literally.
rel
Hi rel-
Thank you..I so agree! Merry Christmas..
This was a very special magpie
wonderful haiku
lovely prayer
Hi Suz-
So happy you liked this..thanks for the comment..
Lovely prayer!
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