Wednesday, December 15, 2010

MAGPIE/ Prompt #45

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FIRST

First to hear my plea.
First to touch the Blessed Babe.
Mary, light my days.


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Thank you Willow, for this lovely Prompt...looking forward to reading all the other writers!!


One and all...the best Holiday season!!


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38 comments:

kathew said...

lovely-Merry Christmas to you

Kat Mortensen said...

Simple and splendid, Lyn. A prayer, a petition and praise in one.

Kat

Lyn said...

Hi kathew-
Thank you...I did like doing this..Merry Christmas!

Lyn said...

Hi Kat-
Thank you..so glad it turned out that way!!

Nanka said...

A good Prayer in Haiku form done very well!!

Lyn said...

Hi Nanka-
Thank you..I do like the Haiku form so much!

kaykuala said...

Lyn,
Short and sweet, how nice? Merry Christmas

Helen said...

Your haiku is as lovely as your blog header photo!
Merry Christmas, Lyn.

Gabriela Abalo said...

Lovely Haiku :)

cheers

Kristen Haskell said...

Very beautiful - Merry Christmas!

Derrick said...

You know, Lyn, I didn't see the haiku, only the beautiful, beautiful simplicity.

Words A Day said...

Mary light my days
such wonderful line -
this is poem to carry

Windsmoke. said...

Fantastic Haiku short and sweet, straight to the point. Merry Christmas.

Lyn said...

Hi kaykuala-
Yes, sometimes short does it! Thanks..

Lyn said...

Hi Helen-
So glad you enjoyed both..Merry Christmas!

Lyn said...

Hi Gabriela-
I appreciate your kind words..thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Kristen-
How nice..I loved doing this one!
Merry Christmas!

Lyn said...

Hi Derrick-
I guess the form really doesn't matter here..I did feel this one...thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Words A Day-
So glad you feel this way..I'm grateful..

Lyn said...

Hi Windsmoke-
Thank you for your visit and kind words..Merry Christmas!

Jingle said...

powerful words...

Merry Christmas!

Tess Kincaid said...

Elegant, Lyn. Merry Christmas, my friend. xx

Gaston Studio said...

Lovely haiku Lyn, simple and says it all.
Happy holidays!

Brian Miller said...

very nice...simple yet pleading...mary christmas...smiles.

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
Your prompts carry me to new heights..Merry Christmas!

Lyn said...

Hi Jane-
I'm learning about brevity!! Thank you so much...have a great Holiday!!

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Thank you..always pleased by your visit!! Happy Holidays..

Tumblewords: said...

Beautiful!

Lyn said...

Hi Tumblewords-
Thanks for your visit and comment!

Daigu said...

A beautiful and oddly complex poem.

Merry Christmas, Lyn.

Lyn said...

Hi Daigu-
Maybe not as simple as I thought..thank you..and a Merry Christmas to you too...

Kavita said...

Succinct, and simply beautiful!!! A lovely Magpie!
May your days always be lit, my friend...

Lyn said...

Hi Kavita-
Lovely comment..and best wishes to you for the Holidays!!

rel said...

Lyn,
She has answered many a prayer; figuratively and literally.
rel

Lyn said...

Hi rel-
Thank you..I so agree! Merry Christmas..

Suz said...

This was a very special magpie
wonderful haiku
lovely prayer

Lyn said...

Hi Suz-
So happy you liked this..thanks for the comment..

nimaruichi said...

Lovely prayer!

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