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GRETEL
Shut up, Hansel and keep walking. For the life of me I can't imagine that you actually threw crumbs on the ground, and expected them not to be swallowed up on sight by some sorry little critter following a numbskull like you.
And stop shushing me..if you had listened to me, we would have ducked out of the house at the very crack of dawn before Papa, and that Joan Rivers look alike decided to take us for an early morning walk in the woods. Did you really think that we were going to practise for the Boston Marathon?
Kids like us throw pebbles on the ground, not crumbs, when they're being lured to their doom by their dumb old man and greedy stepmother. And now you're just walking in circles and of course it's up to me to rescue us, as usual.
Whoa...will you look at that! Nice little cottage, a bit shabby chic, but.. Sort of like "before", on an HGTV makeover, if you know what I mean. A little corny, all those chintzy curtains, but look, a candle in the window! A nice homey touch. Well, beggars can't be...you know what...
I must be dreaming..this is one of those gingerbread houses that kids like us stumble upon from time to time. Have a bite of this window sill..sort of like a Hershey bar. Look, there's a nice little old lady opening the door.
Smile, Hansel, take your hands out of your pockets, wave, and let me do the talking. She's probably got something special for us! Don't be so Grimm.
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Thank you Willow, for another opportunity to be part of Magpie Tales..a good idea that keeps getting better!!
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36 comments:
POSITIVELY INSPIRED!!!
WUNDERBAR! Children gathered frequently around my father, sightless as he was, to hear him tell these stories, always with his "own" twist. Memories! thanks!
Brilliant, I loved it! lol
A clever tale to devour!
Very clever ..I loved it! :o)
From "shut up Hansel" to "Hansel take your hands out of your pockets" this kept me smiling and reading-love your bossy gretal!
Hi Steveroni-
Thanks..I think one should have a point of view!!
Hi Pan-
Thanks for stopping by..and your lovely comment!!
Hi Jinksy-
Thanks..I'm glad you "swallowed" this!!
Hi Deborah-
So happy that you enjoyed..thank you!!
Hi Words A Day-
Thanks..I think I went over the edge with this... fun for me too!!
Hahaha... Oh Lyn, you really have an awesome imagination!
I always thought the bread crumbs was a bad idea...you made the case for sure...wonderful take on the Manor and the tale!
Great fun, Lyn. Not sure Willow will be too pleased with what you said about her house though?!
Hi Mary Ann-
Thank you..I just went for an alternate plot for the Manor!!
Hi Derrick-
Willow?? The Manor?? Yikes, I never thought of that...
Very clever weaving in the folk tale and that last comment... Don't be so grimm.... loved it!
Hi Christine-
Thanks..the last comment..just floated in on a cloud!!
Hi Angie-
Glad you got a laugh!! I do have a bit of fun!!
Brava! Love your contemporary look at this old tale - a laugh, for sure!
Hi Tumblewords-
Thank you for your kind words.. a bossy Gretel, just for fun!
fascinating...got a chuckle that the grimm...brilliant magpie!
Hi Brian-
Thank you, what would I do without these prompts? Can't take everything seriously!!
Love this upbeat modern H & G tale!! Really a fun read, Lyn.
Hi Willow..
You are a gem..bring out something "special" in me...thanks!!!
Oh this is so great! Clever clever you..."dont be so Grimm" Oh hahah
Hi kathew-
Thanks..it's fun to stumble upon things from time to time!!
Ha! Great way to use the prompt, Lyn! Still chuckling!
Hi CatLadyLarew-
We all need a good laugh...thanks!!!
You breath life into a classic tale.
Hi Paul-
Thank you so much..sort of a different slant!
ha, ha! sounds like Gretal is in for the surprise of her life, the little miss know-it-all. I loved this story when i was little. i had it as a live action movie, filmed in Britain or something and would watch it all the time. loved this, great job, she sure is spunky, like your take on her character.
Hi Patience-
Thanks for your kind words..I sort of like this saucy miss!!
Lyn, i absolutely love this!
What a fun and delicious tale!
:-)
Hi Carrie-
Thank you so much..a little fun from time to time..I'll keep trying!
Fun perspective! Have you read "Hansel and Diesel"?
Hi ~T~...
Thanks..the answer is no..and I'm intrigued..will google!!
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