FIRST I GOT SHUT OUT of Jingle, poem already done...what to do? Then I got an invite to join the new Gooseberrygoespoetic Blog. This is good, because poem seemed about to languish. Thanks one and all (Jingle, of course!).
Will not be able to comment for next couple of days because of necessary surgery...shhhh...but will try to catch up. And, fingers crossed, please!
ADAM and EVE and ALIENS
This orb of trees
and blue seas
will be planted
with miracles
from this day forward.
A book will tell the legend.
Pull Eve from his rib now,
let her kiss the bleed
as if she could ever
heal the pain of Adam's desire.
All will bear the scar.
The secrecy of a bitten apple,
will create a yawning wound
as snakes contrive
illusions of fulfillment.
So like the other worlds
where androids reign.
copyright/ all rights reserved/ 2011
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14 comments:
Fingers crossed!
Very interesting twist on the subject.
Blessings to you with regard to your surgery.
Here is my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic for when you get back: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/
Interesting piece ;)
beautiful.
you rock!
:)
Thanks for the shout out.
being late in notifying everyone.
have moving information in posts for days, folks don't tend to read, I guess.
Thanks for the continued support,
you rock!
Holy Aliens!! Love this. : )
I enjoyed the twist to the storyline, you turned it into a fable, nice work!!!
Mine is here: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/fragment-of-yesteryear/
Fantastic version!
Good luck with the surgery :-)
was having the same problem- wonder why i cannot access to jingles nor promising poets etc etc haha but anyway, had been on sabbatical for awhile my friend and since i am back, am glad to see you here at gooseberry! GOOD WRITE MY FRIEND, GOOD WRITE! rgds..
Dear Friends-
Finally able to respond to your welcome comments...away for a few days, no vacation...a bit of necessary surgery took place on Mon. Now recovering impatiently!
Hope to jump back into the blog pool full force very soon and thank you all for being there..and comments heal!!
Lyn:
A great poem --- and prayers of light for whatever is going on in your life right now, and blessings for the tide of change for the storm...
joanny
Hello,
Hope all is well.
Appreciated your support to Jingle Poetry Community, your inputs add light to our place, we would love to see you around weekly…
Welcome sharing your talent in our new garden home.
Random piece or old ones are welcome too.
Bless you.
Happy End of August.
Hope to see you share today.
xoxox
NICE. I DO FEATURE FELLOW POETS ON WEDNESDAY THROUGH THURSDAY. I HOPE TO FEATURE ONE OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITE-UP SOON. THANKS
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