Monday, March 4, 2013

MAGPIE...Prompt #158


                                                     Photo/ The Fox and The Raven


THANK YOU, Tess, for Magpie Tales....


BACK AGAIN

Broken water,
a halo of tendrils
float like tadpoles,

plunging into existence.

A face emerges,
pretty as a succulent Watteau.

Flooded,
without a breath,
now flows my soul,
charged,
begins to sing.

I tumble into days,
it looks like Eden,
seems to be myself.


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24 comments:

Berowne said...

Intriguing, engaging and, of course, well written...

Lyn said...

Hi Berowne-
Thank you...who could ask for more?

Laurie Kolp said...

Beautiful, Lyn.

Little Nell said...

Poetic - and artistic - I like the Watteau reference.

Lyn said...

Hi Laurie-
Thank you so much, Laurie...

Lyn said...

Hi Little Nell-
Thank you..yes, I think I'd like to"sit" for Watteau!

Karen S. said...

seems to be myself, a most perfect close.

Wayne Pitchko said...

very nice...and well written ...thanks for sharing your words

Lyn said...

Hi Karen S.-
Ah, perfection! I like that...thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Wayne-
Reaally appreciate your thoughts..thank you!

izzy said...

Very interesting- I like the tadpole
analogy and then emerging into life.
Thanks.

Kutamun said...

Very succulent indeed !. Thanks Lyn

Helena said...

That last verse finishes the piece beautifully.

Lyn said...

Hi izzy-
Thanks for the lovely comment!

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
So glad you enjoyed this...thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
It was interesting to "do" this one..thanks!

~T~ said...

Fresh, hopeful, lovely!

Lyn said...

Hi ~T~
I'll take them all...thank you!

Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful...especially like the last stanza...Eden, indeed...

Carrie Burtt said...

Breathtaking imagery here Lyn....beautiful!!

Heidi said...

I like where you went with the prompt. The picture reminded me of labor and I like how you have crafted a story of rebirth. Cool write.

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
A new world..yes!! Thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Carrie-
What a lovely thing to say..thank you so much!

Lyn said...

Hi Heidi-
There was something so primal in this for me..yes! Thank you...

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