Tuesday, September 28, 2010

A Little Haiku...



ADD A LITTLE HAIKU TO YOUR LIFE

Droning bee strokes wings
on petal, flies from orchid...
stinger pointing out. 





Ice cubes bounce in glass,
bubbles rise like pink balloons...
my mouth tastes gaiety.


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15 comments:

Jingle said...

very beautiful words.

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Always, thanks for your kind words..

Derrick said...

Hi Lyn,

Love the gaiety in the pink balloon bubbles!

Blue Sky Dreaming said...

Great line "my mouth tastes gaiety"!
Struck a memory cord for me...where is the soda...need some ice too!

Lyn said...

Hi Derrick-
There's something about bubbly..could use some now!

Lyn said...

Hi Mary Ann-
I think we should just have a party! This grey day needs a boost!!

Jeane said...

touchdown with the second one! xxo

Lyn said...

Hi Jeane-
Thanks..that seems to be the general consensus!

Everyday Goddess said...

hooray, gaiety on the tongue! never too late for birthday wishes!xo

Lyn said...

Hi Everyday Goddess-
Thanks..I'll get the glasses..time to celebrate!!

A Cuban In London said...

Ouch! That last line caught me! :-)

Greetings from London.

Rallentanda said...

I have always loved poetry about drinks.

Lyn said...

Greetings to a Cuban-
It seems as if a few folks think so...thank you..

Lyn said...

Hi Rallentanda-
I think I'll compile an anthropology on your favorite poetry!! Thanks for visiting..

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/10/october-birthday-wishes-and-awards.html

awards,
pass to 1 to 10 friends..
Happy Weekend!
xxx

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