People of Chilmark/ Thomas Hart Benton/1920
VERY INSPIRATIONAL, thanks to Tess, for Magpie Tales #73.
ABDUCTION
In Chilmark, every game is a trick of time.
Moments spill over boundaries
of seconds and hours.
Sometimes we live
in a painting by Benton
of strapping young men,
rivaling for glances
from flirtatious sweet things.
My brother, Fox Mulder,
one day on The X-Files,
mentioned that it was
in Chilmark,
where we were raised,
that on November 27, 1973
I was kidnapped by aliens.
The last thing I heard
as the crowd called out,
was Samantha, Samanth....
as the spaceship was sealed.
I was returned on a summer's eve,
like a Frisbee come back,
between a pond named Menemsha
and the one called Squibnocket,
ten years later when boys were now men,
and girls with tired eyes
cuddled babes in their arms.
The night hung heavy
with years passing slowly,
but for me it was just a minute before.
Copyright/ all rights reserved/ 2011
30 comments:
Fabulous write... love the attention to detail, researched well. Tied into the details I found in my search, focused beyond to another worldly feel. I always loved the X Files.
"girls with tired eyes..."
your brilliance....wow...what do I say here.
You certainly know how to paint a picture with words.
Gorgeous.
Hi Reflections-
Love to do research..something always pops up! X-Files...who could say no? Thanks...
Hi Bryce-
So grateful for your kind words..
Things always get cinematic for me...Thanks!!
Lyn, you are so talented in all your writings!
Bravo on this one!
Hi Margie-
A lovely thought..aren't we lucky to have this outlet? Thanks so much...
I really enjoyed this, Lyn! I'm an X-Files fan as well ....
Hi Helen-
I did have fun with this one..thank you..waiting for X-Files reunion!!
ha. i did not see alien abduction coming...made for a very cool verse...and tickled my sci fi bone...
Hi Brian-
Thanks for commenting...no one ever sees alien abduction coming...or the Spanish Inquisition, for that matter!!
Oh, what a fantastic take. I like the way you think, Lyn. Brilliant.
Hi Tess-
I never know where your great pics will take me...thank you, my dear!!
A very fine tale!!
This is so good Lyn. LOved the X files too.
Anna :o]
oh..if only
Hi Tumblewords-
Thanks for your lovely comment!
Hi HyperCRYPTICal-
Appreciate your kind words...thanks...seems like lots still remember X-Files!
Hi Suz-
Thanks..good to hear from you...
Great! I love sci-fi...but can you be sure this did not really happen?
:)
Hi wordsasunder-
Of course it happened!! Ya gotta believe! Thanks for visiting...
wow! an amazing story you've created with this prompt! I love the "every game is a trick of time" and "girls with tired eyes" lines. Great job!
love the unique twist and the adventure you took me on..c
Great imagination bolstered by research and skill = a fine poem.
Enjoyed much. Thank you! and Happy Potluck! Poem on ...
Wonderful take on the prompt. I really enjoyed it.
Hi Lolamouse-
Thanks for your support..I really had fun with this one!
Hi C.M.Jackson-
Seems great to me the path these prompts take...thank you!
Hi Jamie-
I really enjoy research..I find out so much...sometimes leads to a poem! Thanks...
Hi Sue J.-
So happy with your comment...thank you!
Ooh, very creative!
Hi ~T~
Very nice thing to say...thank you!!
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