A PANTOUM is a poetic form that first appeared in the 15th century, in Malayan literature. The Western version is a poem of indefinite length, made up of stanzas of four lines repeated in a pattern: lines 2 and 4 are repeated as lines 1 and 3 of the next stanza, and on and on.
The final stanza has a twist: the 1st and 3rd lines are repeated as usual from the stanza above, the 2nd and 4th lines are the same as the 3rd and 1st lines of the 1st stanza. Confusing enough? I have to practically use a road map to get it straight. But I do like the rhythm that starts to appear, and the results that couldn't happen unless the form was followed. I find a ghostly theme to fit this form quite well.
LIMITATION
Ghosts are more limited than we are.
You may think the opposite is true,
and consider walking through walls
to be a higher gift than dancing.
You may think the opposite is true,
that eternity adrift is a prize,
to be a higher gift than dancing,
as you float along a chilly wall.
That eternity adrift is a prize,
a bit of mischief and nothing more.
As you float along a chilly wall,
it seems a skill like the tango.
A bit of mischief and nothing more.
Hips swaying on the dance floor,
it seems a skill like the tango,
the illusion of walking on air.
Hips swaying on the dance floor,
they say to follow the light,
the illusion of walking on air,
tapping floors to send out a shiver.
They say to follow the light.
An itinerant gliding back,
tapping floors to send out a shiver.
Floating like grey silk up the mortal coil.
An itinerant gliding back,
and consider walking through walls,
floating like grey silk up the mortal coil.
Ghosts are more limited than we are.
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