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THANK YOU, Tess, at Magpie Tales
ABOUT TIME
Got a minute?
There's one flying by,
looks like a Bird of Paradise,
just sliced itself out
of its speckled haven.
Pure before sin,
living its first minute
as infinity licks it clean.
A free pass,
then life spreads its wings.
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29 comments:
As infinity licks it clean...oh that is magnificent...
Hi Tess-
You present and I gratefully follow! Thanks so much!!
smiles....what a cool image of the birth of a moment...love infinity licking the newborn clean....
Hi Brian-
Yes, time everlasting...just born...thank you...
I really like this. If we are not careful, time does pass us by.
oh my- love the image of time being a bird of paradise!
Enjoyed! Bird of Paradise,
just sliced itself out
of its speckled haven. - Very Nice
Wonderful line ...
*as infinity licks it clean*
You do so great on all prompts.
Bravo on this one, Lyn.
Ah, the cosmic egg, breaking out of speckled cases is definitely what it does....
Sorry i missed last week, my new iphone is playing up,
Big brother doesnt like me posting from multiple devices !
Cheers
Hi Laurie--
Thanks for your kind words..too quickly, time, huh???
Hi Kathe W.-
So glad you liked that image..thank you!!
Hi Michael Wells-
Welcome..so happy you liked this!!
Hi Margie-
Always more than kind, my friend..thanks for the encouragement!
Hi Kutamun-
The world is full of glitches, for a change...you are always more than welcome..thank you!!
Love the way those first two lines grab the reader's attention ...
One of my favorites today.
=)
Hi Kat-
Great to hear from you...thanks so much!!
Hi Helen-
Glad when that happens..thanks for your kind words!
Hi Sue-
I'm so pleased...thank you...
This is magnificent I agree with Tess here I really liked that line as well
Magnificent words indeed. Superb!
Anna :o]
I love that it's so short too. The length of the poem itself - brevity, the soul of wit, yes?
All in a moment. And then...
Love
D
Ah, so sweetly imbued, I'll take that free pass as well. Lyn, this blog photo brings to mind another lovely magpie tale we all shared, and quite a man he was back in time.
Don't blink--huh?
Hi mindlovemisery-
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
So happy to read your generous words...thanks!!
Hi dori-
Indeed, all in a moment..thanks so much!
Hi Karen S.-
So much to share..lucky..and thank you for the comment!
Hi Jerry-
Yes, that's it..thanks!
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