RED CHAIR
THANK YOU Tess, for Magpie Tales
PASSAGEWAY
Half demolished,
the house of early days.
Windows,
shapes without glass,
every breath,
freed from the walls,
now part of the wind.
All I feared
were simply tales,
old wives whistling.
Days of first dreams
now have
the weight of silk, fraying.
Chairs splinter into fossils,
specters work.
Timid memories
float from my mind.
All phantoms left behind,
asleep in Samsara.
I pick up a key
to swift passage.
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28 comments:
"Days of first dreams now have the weight of silk, fraying." Love that.
every breath,
freed from the walls,
now part of the wind...love that bit...i wonder if they are tearing down monuments to their past...that is the feel i get...and moving on...
I like that, "Days of first dreams" can smooth over any day gone bad. Nice images filtering throughout your passage!
"Days of first dreams now have the weight of silk, fraying"
Great read.
Good writing, and rather moving.
Hi ReBelle-
Thanks for your kind words!!
Hi Brian-
I think she's detaching from the past..definitely moving on..you got it!
Hi Karen S-
Thanks so much..I too saw images fleeting by..
Hi Gail-
So glad you enjoyed this..thanks!
Hi Berowne-
Thank you..I had no idea where this was going...sometimes I'm surprised!
Another lovely gift from Lyn!
Hi Helen-
Thanks...you're always so welcome!
"old wives whistling".....what an image....what amazing lines here Lyn! :-)
Beautifully expressed and a personal reminder of the days of leaving my parents home to be sold. Thank you Lyn
Hi Carrie-
So glad you like my lines!! Thanks so much..
Hi Blue Sky Dreaming-
Interesting that you have a real tie to this..I appreciate that...thanks!
Always moving this, like a gentle breeze
so much to like about this.....thanks for sharing your words
Hi Kutamun-
Lovely..so glad you like the images...thanks.
Hi Wayne-
Good to hear from you...and many thanks!
Evocative...I can hear the old wives whistling...
I love the timelessness of your words and the freedom of the spirit floating and flowing on and on. Thank you for sharing, Lyn.
These lines are wonderfully stirring - leaving a past behind her. Nicely crafted, Lyn!
Magical.
Hi Tess-
What an interesting challenge..thanks to you...
Hi Linda-
Lovely thoughts, they too float..thank you!
Hi Helena-
Thanks for your words..I had to get her to leave it all!!
Hi Tumblewords-
So pleased with your thoughts...thanks!
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