ENDEAVOR/ Lino Tagliapietra
THANK YOU, Tess, for this lively presentation for Magpie Tales #71
EVOLUTION
Just one more wave, my friends,
swim with me over the spray.
We'll drop our scales,
grow legs to walk on land.
Call ourselves evolved.
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48 comments:
On the way to becoming. I like the thought.
Here's my Magpie: Afloat
A clever and well written one, Lyn.
If being evolved was this simple! Beautifully written, Lyn.
its so simple and stunning!
succinct - why did Darwin take so many pages?
Hi Strummed Words-
Welcome!! We always are, aren't we? Thank you...
Hi Brigid-
I rewarded myself with a short one today! Thanks!!
Hi Helen-
What's a million years or so? Thank you so much!
Hi lunawitch15-
I really like the simple part of it! Thank you...
Hi Isabel-
I think Darwin went through a couple more species! I'm into conservation these days!!
Excellent. Thanks for the smiles.
This piece seems to be taking people to a simple, evolving place. There is certainly the motion of your waves.
Hi Tess-
Please just keep on tossing these pics..magic!! Thank you..
Hi Reflections-
I think we're always evolving..from any point onward...thanks!
Very unique and a beautiful take on the prompt.
Thank you for this.
Killer last line!
Hi cosmos cami-
I really appreciate your kind words..this was fun for me!!
Hi Mama Zen-
Sometimes the less said the better!! Thank you...
Oh I really like this. It always amazes me how sometimes a few perfectly formed words can say so much.
Lyn, love your new header and also this poem!
Beautifully done!
Margie :)
Hi 120 Socks-
Thank you..I agree, often less is more!
Hi Margie-
Time to change the header..thanks!! And also for your comment...wow..
Oh, this just hit the spot! Perfect, Lyn!
Hi Rick-
Thank you so much..perfect is good!! Have got to start measuring my words...
evolving should be a constant--thanks for the reminder
Hi C.M. Jackson-
I agree..but we seem to be devolving right now...thanks for dropping by!
So simple, yet so profound! Super!
I really like your take on the prompt! Awesome there is something primordial about the piece
Hi hemarao-
Thanks for dropping by..I appreciate your comment!
Hi mindlovemisery-
I just loved those floating creatures, right from the beginning! Thanks...
Nice imagery here. Time taking it's scaly get there, time!
Lyn - so much said in so few words. Brilliant!
Anna :o]
Hi Lena-
Thanks for the visit and the comment...
Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
I'm getting happy about fewer words! Thanks...
It's all been said. The power of a few words. Well done.
Hi Martin H.-
Like what you said..a few words...thank you!!
wondering...is this about evolution of man or evolution of a specific man within a lifetime... perhaps both. simply written, but thought provoking.
Hi we are the we-
Welcome...
I think possibly it's about ego, that walking upright proves we're evolved...or.....
Thanks!
Terrific - surely a fine read!
Hi Tumblewords-
This was one that came on fast...that pic...glad you liked it...thanks!
Excellent. I enjoyed it.
Hi Sue J -
Welcome...thanks so much!
Snappy. It works well.
Hi Dave-
Nice to see you again!! I loved this photo for what it brought out..thanks ..
simple, yet so well written it's amazing:)
Oh I do like this.
Hi Sezaaay-
I really appreciate your comment..thank you!!
Hi Bee's Blog-
So glad you do!! Thanks...
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