Photo/ Melissa R. Bickel/ Short Story Slam #3
GOING...
They think I won't leave. That the weather will keep me from leaving. That I have fear. That they will prevail.
I'm standing at the window, and not a drop of rain has fallen yet. The sky has the message. I will encompass you. The heavens always have a message. Sometimes to comfort. Today, no ray of hope.
A bolt from the mouth of creation says, I will put on a show of force that you haven't yet dreamed of. Well, I come from a place where a lack of sunlight enters with the day, and dusk is just the time to stoke the coals.
I'll have some soup before I leave, the pot sitting daily at the back of the stove. I'll add something that was hanging in the cold-room, after I take a bowl, so that they will not suspect a departure.
I'm going. Not with shoes. Not with skins for warmth. When I cut the cord I will go into the world like a babe. Let them just try to follow. Let them just try to stop me.
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16 comments:
way too cool.
love your take.
smiles.
wow, Lyn! so much power in this - so well done xo
Hi Bluebell...
Thanks to you for the slam...loved it!
Hi Jeane-
This was an interesting one for me to do..thanks so much!
"Let them just try to stop me."
Loved this piece. Great voice!
Very nice job, indeed.
Like your blog, as well!
Hi Bryce-
Welcome, and thanks! Please read "Stand-in", Short Story Slam #2. May 31. Uncle Brice? hmmm...it was meant to be!
Loved these lines ...
The heavens always have a message. Sometimes no comfort. Today, no ray of hope.
Very well done, Lyn.
Margie :)
Hi Margie-
Thanks..the thing is to break away, I guess!
Love that 'bolt from the mouth of creation.'
Oooh, like the power, the determination in this one.
Hi Vicki-
Thank you..that came to me like a bolt!! You never know!!
Hi Reflections-
So pleased you liked this...thanks!
what a excellent catch...
have a lovely weekend.
ThaNKS FOR LINKING.
Fantastic I love the presence of this one and the ending. Great job!
Hi Jingle-
Thanks for your kind words!
Hi mindlovemisery-
Thank you..so glad you enjoyed this!
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