Bodiam Castle
I WAS CHARMED by the idea of this week's Poetry Potluck #35. Fortresses, Castles, Palaces and Royal Houses! Bound to be intriguing...
POWER
You are a fortress.
The mighty build a deep moat,
but I am the Sun.
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24 comments:
such power in a short verse...brilliant.
This is a great short poem. Truly amazing.
WOW. Evey word packs a punch, the last line a crescendo!
so perfectly simple...
Hi David Allen Waters-
Thank you so much..there is that haiku challenge that I love!
Hi verseinanutshell-
I really appreciate you comment..thanks!
Hi roughwaterjohn-
Really so nice of you to visit and comment...thanks!
Hi Evelyn-
Thanks for the lovely comment...
Powerful stuff - your message is clear.
That last line gives the haiku it's punch. Nice write!
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Hi poetry-diary-
Thanks for your generous thought...
Hi Jessica-
Nice ..haiku is such a great discipline!
Oh, you did wonderful!
Love it, Lyn.
I love this! Sun in triumph!
Hi Margie-
Lovely..thank you so much!!
super compact and wise.
well done.
you are true to the sun -- powerful :)
Hi honeyhaiku-
Thanks for you comment..I appreciate it!
Hi Jingle-
Thanks..I like to try a haiku now and then...
Hi bendedspoon-
Lovely comment...thanks!
Short but powerful! (sort of like my husband!)
Hi Lolamouse-
The best kind! Thanks so much!
Your well-measured words said it all, my dear.. that was a certain ROOAAARR!!
Loved this!
Hi Kavita-
Thank you for your kind words...
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