WHO CAN RESIST this week's Poetry Potluck #34 ?
Color, Spring, and Rainbow! Count me in...
ARC OF THE RAINBOW
I stood in the green arc
of the rainbow,
the other colors hovering,
waiting to absorb me,
make me red or yellow.
But blue, itself heavenly,
lifted me upwards
towards the sky.
All pooled into white,
a light turned on,
the beckoning path,
where familiar faces
looked my way,
hands waving me on.
But I decided to go back,
carrying a pot of gold,
hoping to spend it well.
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26 comments:
Love rainbows.
magical word painting...
Thanks for being THERE.
A++
Happy Mothers Day,
You Rock.
So love that rainbow and so love your poem, Lyn.
It's lovely!
Very nice =) Inspiring. Oh if only I found a pot of gold
Hi Jingle-
Always a pleasure to read your words...thanks!
Hi Margie-
Lovely comment...thank you!
Hi mindlovemisery-
So nice to welcome you! Pot of gold...it's there!!
Near life experiences must be grand!
Hi booguloo_
They are..I keep having them, still come back!! Thanks for dropping by..
The spiritual references are delightfully woven into this colorful piece, Lyn. I, too, am aware of and enamored by the effects and meanings of the rainbow's colors. Lovely.
hehe if only if only
Pot of gold?
hmmmm.. That was nice indeed..
Rainbows do take you to heaven.. huh?
Many hugs xox
Hi Kim-
Spirit and color..that says it to me!! Thank you!!
Hi lunawitch15-
Pot of gold..I know!! Thanks...
Hi Olivia-
The whole thing was just a fanciful dream for me...thanks!!
Wow, I love this one, Lyn! : )
I enjoyed the tension of wanting to move on toward that rainbow but needing to go back.
Hi thingy-
So glad you do..thanks!!
Hi Victoria-
That is the story, I guess..thanks so much!!
This felt so ethereal and light. Job well done on the theme, Lyn.
Spend it well ... as least as well as you have written! Nice work and what a fine photo as well. Enjoyed this post. Thanks!
Hi bodhirose-
A pleasure to read your lovely comment..thank you!
Hi Jamie-
Your comment.. always interesting...thank you!
Good imagry. You make the colors sing.
Hi mindsinger-
This was a good one for me to do...thank you!
I would love that if that is really what happens when you die.
Beautiful thank you.
Hi funnygirllola-
Thanks for your visit..and I only speak my truth!! I like that point of view..
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