THIS WEEK'S Poetry Potluck #33, presents us with the opportunity to deal with our Doubts, Fears, Inhibitions and Hesitations. What weighs me down the most? I hesitate to tell you...
OUT OF THE BLUE
A friend schedules a seance.
I'm the ghost.
I come through
but it's Greek to me.
That makes two of us
who wonder
what my spirit is up to.
I fear my soul
may have
a separate language,
and it's one
I do not speak.
Out of the blue
I start scattering
tittle-tattle,
revealing secrets,
and everyone
gets the message
but me,
because I still
haven't learned
the true
heart to heart
of Heaven.
copyright/ all rights reserved/ 2011
http://www.minblu.blogspot.com/
http://twitter.com/lynxny
16 comments:
life is a learning journey,
you are ahead of many,
keep the course sailing.
Love your entry,
A++
:)
Bless your talent.
yes, I can understand how that could be a genuine fear. a frightening thought very well expressed! :)
loved it!
thank you
a truly remarkable write! thank you!
Luna
You describe well that sometime- disconnect between spirit and self.
Nice twist on the ghost idea. like it!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/darkly-imagined/
Hi Jingle-
Blessings to you too, my friend! And many thanks for the opportunities...
Hi Hope-
Thanks for your special words!
Hi lunawitch15-
I'm grateful for your words..thank you!!
Hi WyomingDiva-
Welcome and thank you..it's that disconnect that gets us!!
Hi Jessica-
Thank you..me and ghosts, huh??
great write! one speaks the language of truth and I fear the other is not, from my own experience. Huggs :)
What a clever write, Lyn. Loved it.
Hi bendedspoon-
I agree with you, and appreciate your comment...thanks...
Hi thingy-
So glad you did! Thanks so much!
A fantastic write and the image choice is outstanding!
Hi abthomas-
I really appreciate your terrific comment..thanks!!!
Post a Comment