THIS week's Poetry Potluck ...Based on Moods, Feelings, Emotions..plenty there to go around...count me in! How about you? So much talent...Please check the site to join in!
WALK WITH ME
Dust falls from
The Book of Demons.
Dead flies shift in the silt.
The Book of Demons.
Dead flies shift in the silt.
I remove the tome from a shelf,
delve into lists
of devils I have known,
of devils I have known,
from A to Z.
When darkness rises,
who will come with me?
Lesser angels
or minor demons,
each owning
half of the other?
Walk with me....
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38 comments:
I can't believe this.. I meant; this looks like the first part to my Poem - Walk with Me.. Go on and check it out directly at http://www.intinglligent.com/2010/10/walk-with-me.html
I was staring blankly at your words.. I was thinking how could someone shared a feeling which I thought no one else comprehend?
My dear,I am glad that I found you through Monday Potluck, and here are my entires – different feelings for both..
http://www.intinglligent.com/2010/11/electrify.html
http://www.intinglligent.com/2010/09/just-tree.html
I didn't use Walk with Me for this week's potluck though.. I was saving it for, you know, for something more.. ;)
Hope to see you in my blog soon..
See you around..
S.Pike
I enjoyed this poem very much because it sounded like it came from the dark side of life or death which ever ths case maybe.
lovely..
Hi Krislin Neo-
I am a deep believer in synchronicity..so why not the "coincidence" of like minds. For me it is a spiritual confirmation..so glad to hear from you..will definitely be visiting!!
this is profound and intense... what a brilliant piece!
Bye For Now
Hi Windsmoke-
Thanks....dark or light, it's all part of the whole for me!
Hi fiveloaf-
Thanks for the visit!!
Hi Bing-
Really appreciate your comment..looked at your Blog..can see why we're communicating!!
When darkness rises,
who will come with me?
Lesser angels
or minor demons,
each owning
half of the other?
Walk with me....
truly love every single word of your poem, lyn...
brilliant flow,
beautiful read.
Thanks for the love for potluck poetry,
u rock!
Hi Jingle-
It is your wonderful prompting that makes this possible..thank you!!
mmmmm, flavors of both worlds - intense, xxo
A fantastic sketch of the darkness!
enchanting words...
dark and brooding piece. great job!
Dust does fall from the books of time... only to rise in the darkness.
Ah, the play of demons and angels, etching texture into our lives. Very well done, Lyn. Thanks for your comments as well.
Victoria
Hi Jeane-
I like that..2 worlds! Thanks!!
Hi abthomas-
So nice of you to visit, and such kind words..thanks!
High darksong-
Very encouraging words..thank you!!
Hi industrialarts-
At times I don't where I'm going with a poem..this one sort of got there!! Thanks...
I think there are other beings that lie between angels and demons, beings that are equal parts good and evil. They're called humans.
Nice piece!
Hi Reflections-
Very interesting comment..thanks!!
Hi liv2write2day-
Thanks for your support..and your visit..wonderful!!
ah does it really matter?
liked this toe into darkness
Hi Suz-
Existential, huh? Thanks..I like to take chances...in fiction!!
Hi Eric-
You got it! The way of the world..thanks so much for your comment!
Dear Lyn
So beautiful thought.. walk with me.. I loved the ending so much.. thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Hi Shashi-
So pleased by your comment..thanks so much!!
wonderful poem.
Lyn,
This is a beautiful and poignant piece. I believe we walk with angels and demons on this earth.
Thanks for visiting my blog.
Pamela
Hi flaubert-
Lucky to have found you..and thanks so much for the visit and kind words!
Hi 700miles-
So pleased you liked this..thank you!!
Very telling, Lyn. This is so simple and so deep. Love the words you've used. Emotions we may sometimes wish to deny. Walk with me? Who will, indeed?!
Hi Derrick-
I think it's the desire to reveal, that leads us to poetry..ordinary conversation can be inhibiting...on the other hand..it's just writing!! Thanks, Derrick..
Compelling. Well done. :-) Enjoy poem and photo. Thanks!
Hi Jamie-
Thanks so much for visiting and for your kind words!
Once upon a time, I attended a religious college, and there were many old dusty tomes full of lists of angels, demons and martyrs. Since I was a library assistant, I think I touched them all. I could smell the dust reading your poem.
My potluck offering:
http://shawnbird.com/2010/11/16/what-does-love-sound-like/
Hi Shawnbird-
Thanks so much for visiting..very interested in your comment..I too have an old tome, top shelf, never touch it...lots of dust..thanks!!
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