Monday, December 17, 2012

MAGPIE TALES...Prompt #148



                                                                 Photo/ Andy Magee


Thank you Tess, at Magpie Tales.

           Something to share...a bit of good luck.  A really terrific blog, VenusBlogs,  genererally covers "women's issues" in a most creative and enlightened way, asked for permission to post my poem of last week, Magpie Prompt #147, "Lost At Sea".  You bet!! 
           Please check it out....http://venusblogs.com/lost-at-sea/


YOU PROMISED

Follow me to the
end of the world.  Desire me
at the finish line.


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22 comments:

Helen said...

Yes, yes, yes.

Berowne said...

Fresh, sparkling, appealing. Lyn, you did so well with my last quiz; how abut this week's?

Lyn said...

Hi Helen-
Thanks, I really like that word!

Lyn said...

Hi Berowne-
Thanks so much...Definitely ready to fall under your spell again..I can only try!

Brian Miller said...

excellent short...desire me at the finish line...def wish more would finish together...smiles.

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Guess I got Mayan predictions on my mind..just to kid about, of course..thanks!

kelvin s.m. said...

..o yes... a short commanding poem... i like the voice... smiles...

izzy said...

It flows nicely and I would enjoy an end like that! thanks.

Lyn said...

Hi Kelvin S.M.-
So glad you like the "voice"..thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi izzy-
Thank you...me too!

Carrie Van Horn said...

So much said here Lyn.....beautiful and I love your new photo it is beautiful as well!!

kaykuala said...

Appropriately addressed to someone dear to one's heart. Nicely Lynn!

Hank

Kathe W. said...

Lyn- so much said in this lovely Haiku!

Lyn said...

Hi Carrie-
Thanks..I like to try short and sweet sometimes...and the pic, my daughter snapped it, time to drop incognito!!

Lyn said...

Hi kaykuala-
Hank...sometimes I seem like a romantic...thank you!!

Lyn said...

Hi Kathe W.-
I love to "play" with the Haiku! Thanks...

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Excellent.

To still be desired at the finish line is a worth prize.

Anna :o]

Lyn said...

Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
Thank you..I like your comment!

Helena said...

Yes. I'd be up for that, too!

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
Thanks...really not too much to ask!!

Silent Otto said...

A lot of surrender involved here Lyn , sounds intriguing. Merry xmas or whatever you celebrate ! . Kuta

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
Interesting response..thanks..and I'm lucky, because I choose to celebrate all spiritual holidays..so, Merry Christmas!!

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