photo/ Mag 84
ENTICING....that's Magpie Tales for this week...thanks, Tess...
PATTERN
Here hovers the Rain God
pinning his will
like a bespoke garment,
to my silhouette.
Hallowed mist
slicks my skin,
my spirit goes bang
on the downbeat.
I want to surprise
with wisdom and grace,but
Brother Raven and I,
the usual act,
take wing for sightseers.
Why does the fated
weary me so?
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28 comments:
I love "my spirit goes bang on the heartbeat".
I love your header!
Great Story in verse. Loved it.
The usual act...oh, I like that...
Hi Fireblosson-
It's on the downbeat, but I do like heartbeat too..thanks so much!!
Hi Sean-
Thanks for your comment..I enjoyed this one, as usual!!
Hi Tess-
What a photo! So inspirational..thanks, again!
love the emotion and mystery of this...
Banging spirits? New to me - I thought they were silent! LOL
A lot of truth here! it is cool to end with a question- Thanks!
Hi C.M Jackson-
Thank you..that photo was pure mystery!
Hi izzy-
Thanks..truth is, I usually have a question at the end!
Hi Jinksy-
Mine would only disappear after an exorcism...noisy little imps! Thanks!!
an intriguing write...great opening stanza with wonderful imagery...the bang on the down beat, nice makesme think thunder...your question iscertainly oneto think on, asit does carry a familiar feeling...
this one just rolled off of the tongue...really liked it
Hi Brian-
So much fitting in, conformity..sort of "where's the real me"? Thanks for your insight!
Hi Suz-
Well, that's a nice thing to happen!! Thanks so much!
A Rain God pinning his will to your silhouette - nice.
I aways like the unexpected, unpredictable.
This one certainly is.
Hi Martin-
Thanks for your comment..I appreciate it!
Hi Friko-
I too found this to be unpredictable! Thanks so much for the visit!!
Love the new header photo!
Nice! love the mystic feel of this, the want, yet the reality.
fantastic.
Lynn,
Introspective; the rain does that often. Leaving mind and body cleansed if not refreshed.
rel
Beautiful, evocative poem that really gets all the aspects of the image working for it!
Hi Reflections-
Thank you..I think you're right...want/ reality, always there!
Hi Morning-
Lovely...thanks !!
Hi rel-
Thank you...but it always will rain!!
Hi Nicholas V-
So glad to read your comment..thanks!!
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