UNFRAMED
The brass monkey
spilled wax
and just stood there
in total innocence.
Its flickering light
was cast upon
a photo of me, running.
Why is it still unframed?
Can torn and ragged edges
support it forever?
Is having an intention
not to fall
good enough?
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14 comments:
Nice frame for the eternal questions, if you don't mind my piling on the metaphor.
Hi Gerry-
Thanks for visiting..and pile away!!
Oh, wow. Wasn't expecting this, have no idea why. Your poem gives me a sense of indomitability, of rough edges that dare to defy the passing of time. This line, in particular, made smile:
'Can torn and ragged edges
support it forever?'
Good poetry makes you think. Yours surely did so and then a lot more. :-)
Many thanks.
Greetings from London.
Greetings to a Cuban-
Sometimes I don't know what I believe till I write a poem..
ragged edges and indomitability equal survival..
Thanks, always...
I don't feel dull, I don't feel hollow.
I found myself in your "Blogs I
Follow." :-)
Hi Berowne-
Very good taste, as usual..Thanks for visiting...
Lyn, so glad to find your blog! The poem has a tensile strength that I like, all the while seeming about to vanish from the page, float away beyond the frame--does that make sense?
Come visit me in my kitchen when you get the urge--I'll be posting more poems there.
K.
Hi Kathryn-
Thanks so much for visiting..I know exactly what you mean about floating past the frame..because practically everything I write is a little movie!
Lyn- so glad you found my blog and that I have found yours. Looks like you are a fascinating soul. I will visit often
Love, Lo
Hi Lo-
So glad to have met up with you! Looking through your bio, I see you live in N.Hollywood..so does my son!!
Maybe your running is actually your striving? A thought provoking post Lyn. Thanks for stopping over and leaving a comment.
Hi Sylvia-
Thank you..that sounds perfectly logical..need comments to see what I've done...
you make magic out of words - I really like this xxo
Hi Jeane-
So glad to see you back, and thanks for the kind words...will try to get out today to face results of yesterday's blizzard!!
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