Sunday, August 11, 2013
MAGPIE...Prompt #181
Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec
THANK YOU Tess, for Magpie Tales...
GLIDE
It will never halt,
this loop of jazz
sheathing my pulse,
my sweat stuck
to your cheek,
a briny recipe
for a singular hunger.
I pull away, glide,
a trickle
bounces off my breast,
enticing a glance
from your smoky eye.
Like a butterfly
just coming loose,
I alight on your rhythm.
Out of the blue
you're across the room,
then back beside me
in a stride.
Who is she?
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26 comments:
who is she indeed!
I loved the movement in this
like that butterfly stanza, there is def a lot of sweating when you really get into that dance...ha...but surely three is a crowd...and she needs to understand that...ha.
Hi Rene-
Just the fly in the ointment, I guess!Thanks...
Hi Brian-
Feels like it will be two again, soon, but which two? Thank you Brian!
Don't you LOVE how the artwork inspired the dance in so many of us? Your Mag is wonderful, Lyn.
Resourceful and sharp; well done.
Like two Swans , very beautiful.....
Haha...oh what a clever last line! Definitely tosses some drama into the guesswork! Loved it. Very nice, seems to fit the artwork perfectly.
D
This moves beautifully!
A-cross a crow-ded roooom...lovely write Lyn!
Hi Helen-
Ye, I count on the inspiration of others! Thank you...
Hi Berowne-
Thanks so much for your generous words!
Hi Kutamun-
In love with beauty! Thanks...
Hi dori-
This deinitely came from the art...Thanks so much!!
Hi Mama Zen-
Thanks for your lovely comment!
Hi Tess-
Love the way you sing...thanks so much!!
Brings back memories of the dance halls of my youth...
My wife insists that I had better not have any idea.
Hi Trellissimo-
You had dance halls! What fun..thanks...
Hi Jerry-
I'm with your wife!! Thank you...
Has to be you, right?
Loved this!
loved the feel and emotion
The ever illusive butterfly of love....a really enjoyable read, Lyn. The opening verse is superb.
Hi Margie-
Me? Just my imagination! Thanks so much!
Hi Chris-
I really appreciate your comment..thanks!
Hi Helena-
So kind of you...glad you enjoyed it..thanks!
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