PONYTAIL/ Last Exit
THANK YOU, Tess...at Magpie Tales...
BEGINNING
Before your face took shape
I saw a flow of will erupt,
nodded yes my baby,
I feel your heart alongside mine.
That vortex on the silver screen
is the spot where a blue eye will cry
if love doesn't pour over you,
run down each step of your being.
When your raven hair unravels,
I'll place a ribbon, invisible,
in a loop
that ties you close to me,
see to it that all love
decants like wine,
flows your way...
nine months to go.
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27 comments:
This is so sweet. Its a poem to keep and reread. Thank you for sharing.
Hi Charleen-
What a nice thing to say! Thanks so much...
Beautifully ingenious...
I have pondered this image for a while this morning ... I think you captured the essence. I see what you see, Lyn.
So very touching, and filled with loving joy... to arrive soon! I like your vision!
Hi Berowne-
How elegant..thank you!
Hi Helen-
I saw a tadpole sort of eye right away..funny about this stuff! Thanks...
Hi Karen S.
Thanks for your kind words...sort of fell into place!!
ah lovely...nine months of anticipation at that...you do capture a bit of the magic of the pic...and of love that creates...
Oh my god was that gorgeous! Wow, I hope many people get to read this one.
Oh my, what a lovely response to this image. So tender...wonderful.
This is exquisite! Charleen is correct its the kind of poem you want to read again and again there is a wonderful aura about it
Hi Brian-
Very nice words...thank you so much!
Hi dori-
Extremely nice comment..thank you!
Hi Other Mary-
It sort jumped out at me..thanks for your kindness...
Hi mindlovemisery-
Such lovely words..thanks so much...
I think you have given birth to something very beautiful here, my friend....such tender feeling
Hi Kutamun-
Good for us..we do go on!! thanks so much...
I love this. It sort of ties in to my post today and has left me a bit emotional. I shall be back for second and third helpings of this fine piece. Thanks, Lyn.
Hi Helena-
Lovely..thanks for this comment..
Excellent poem that works very well. Loved the unexpectedness of some of the lines.
Hi Dave-
Very encouraging words! Thanks so much..
Incredibly beautiful!
Anna :o]
Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
Wow! Who could ask for more? Thank you....
Beautiful unexpected ending...
Hi Tess-
Thank you..as so often happens, the words are a surprise to me too!!
Full of anticipation and full of love. Motherhood is a noble assignment that only mothers can fully narrate with pride! Nicely Lyn!
Hank
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