Photo/ The Fox and The Raven
THANK YOU, Tess, for Magpie Tales....
BACK AGAIN
Broken water,
a halo of tendrils
float like tadpoles,
plunging into existence.
A face emerges,
pretty as a succulent Watteau.
Flooded,
without a breath,
now flows my soul,
charged,
begins to sing.
I tumble into days,
it looks like Eden,
seems to be myself.
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24 comments:
Intriguing, engaging and, of course, well written...
Hi Berowne-
Thank you...who could ask for more?
Beautiful, Lyn.
Poetic - and artistic - I like the Watteau reference.
Hi Laurie-
Thank you so much, Laurie...
Hi Little Nell-
Thank you..yes, I think I'd like to"sit" for Watteau!
seems to be myself, a most perfect close.
very nice...and well written ...thanks for sharing your words
Hi Karen S.-
Ah, perfection! I like that...thanks!
Hi Wayne-
Reaally appreciate your thoughts..thank you!
Very interesting- I like the tadpole
analogy and then emerging into life.
Thanks.
Very succulent indeed !. Thanks Lyn
That last verse finishes the piece beautifully.
Hi izzy-
Thanks for the lovely comment!
Hi Kutamun-
So glad you enjoyed this...thanks!
Hi Helena-
It was interesting to "do" this one..thanks!
Fresh, hopeful, lovely!
Hi ~T~
I'll take them all...thank you!
Beautiful...especially like the last stanza...Eden, indeed...
Breathtaking imagery here Lyn....beautiful!!
I like where you went with the prompt. The picture reminded me of labor and I like how you have crafted a story of rebirth. Cool write.
Hi Tess-
A new world..yes!! Thank you!
Hi Carrie-
What a lovely thing to say..thank you so much!
Hi Heidi-
There was something so primal in this for me..yes! Thank you...
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