Image/ Uzengia Aleksander Nedic
THANK YOU, TESS, for Magpie Tales, #108.
LIGHT
And then I died and went to heaven,
turned back,
to come back?
A girl again,
lost in the surprise of death,
I saw the murky place
over my left shoulder,
the world of languish.
Or would I rise
to be tickled
by the light of angels
wrapped in flutter?
Prayers in my heart
float up like butterflies.
Sound is color,
words are music.
Soul writes itself,
bounces off a temple bell,
flirts with Gods and Goddesses,
a code deciphered at last.
So life's a chrysalis after all,
give me your hand,
be a fool no longer,
take the gift, fly.
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24 comments:
i think it might be rather fascinating to come back as a butterfly you know...they are so beautiful and to fly...ah...
this is awesome!
You are flying high Lyn, flying high. Awesome is the word. Thanks for sharing this.
Hi Brian-
Thanks Brian, it's all ahead of us!!
Hi Legally Chocolat-
How nice to hear from you...thanks!
Hi Linda-
Well, aren't you something!! I'm grateful for your words...thanks...
-the world of languish- beautiful line and beatuiful poem:)
Coming back, reincarnation .. yes, it's fascinating! So is your poem.
Remarkable tale, so well thought out and entertaining...
great words.....thanks for sharing
Hi Brigid-
Thank you for your kind words!
Hi Helen-
I liked this prompt a lot..always intrigued by spiritual opportunities!
Hi Berowne-
So glad you enjoyed this one..I really like the "entertaining" part.
Hi Wayne-
More than kind..thanks so much!
Lyn this is glorious!!!!!!
"prayers in my heart float up like butterflies" this poem of yours is simply dreamy.
Hi Carrie-
Always thank you for your lovely comments...Thanks!!!
Hi Paige-
So happy to receive your comment..thank you!
Excellent write Lyn - awesome indeed!
Anna :o]
be a fool no longer -> good advice
depth of field
Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
Thanks for your gracious comment!
Hi zongrik-
No fools hanging around here! Thank you...
Take the gift-fly...words of such magical strength, I am trying to fly.
I could not reply to your no reply comment blogger so I am hear again. After reading some other creations of yours I have joined the fan club.
I love forward to your continuing creations.
Hi Gail-
Wonderful to hear from you..such kind words..thanks so much!
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