Monday, January 23, 2012
MAGPIE...Prompt #101
from Boris Hoppek's Tokyo exhibit..."Ever"
INSPIRATION. Mystery? Thanks to Tess at Magpie Tales.
BETTER THAN REAL
Pull the strap that binds
and up jumps
glamorous Anime Annie,
the exotic Animatronic Geisha.
Lotus scented little dream girl
from Proctor and Gamble
and Disney,
she'll dance on your back
with her loufa feet,
scamper up and down your spine,
splash bubbles through your hair
for a scintillating shampoo.
And when you're finished,
she's easily disposed of!
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28 comments:
"The exotic Animatronic Geisha."
That may be the best kind. :-)
Ooo! Nice . . . but sinister. I like it.
Hi Berowne-
Funny, but I agree with you! Thanks...
Hi Lyn,
I LOVE this, funny and sad at the same time. So easily disposed of she is....
Thanks for sharing.
ugh..making her just an object to use and throw away if it's no longer fun...sad..
Hi Doctor FTSE-
So glad you "got" this..thank you.... and sinister, indeed.
Hi Yvonne-
Sort of like the work history of women!! Thanks for your comment..
Hi Claudia-
Sad, but true..but, robots, no more!! Thank you...
exotic Animatronic Geisha
I must say, to me, the image looked like a well wrapped bar of soap meant for the bathroom! Loved the words you used...
Big business ... destroyer of the innocent and downtrodden.
Hi Trellissimo-
It sure looked that way to me too! Thus the poem...thank you!
Hi Helen-
They will when they can, for sure! Thanks..
unexpected ending.
I guess we are headed for Animatronic Geishas . . some image!
Hi Summer...
The best kind! Thank you...
Hi Lucy-
Guess we are sort of replacable..technology,progress?? Thanks..
Nice take!.. :-)
JJRod'z
Calm surface - wicked undercurrent.
Cute.
Yes, sinister, but captivatingly written as only you could do Lyn...wonderful writing as always.
:-)
Hi JJ...
Lovely to hear from you...thanks!
Hi DCW-
Thanks, I like the "wicked" idea!
Hi Paige-
Thanks for stopping by...
Hi Carrie-
You must be my fairy godmother..you treat me so well...thanks so much!!
that first stanza is just great!!
i love every line in that first stanza
lamb's wool
Hi zongrik-
I had to go back and read it myself..well, thanks so much!
oh no, easily disposed of?
rel
Hi rel-
I fear it may be true! Thanks...
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