Falling Woman/ Picasso
WHAT A LUCKY MORNING, to have found Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads. This is Kerry's Wednesday Challenge/ Prose Poetry. Looking forward to jumping in!! Will try to link up later...fingers crossed!!
LET THE GROUND TREMBLE
Take your hands away, don't grasp me, grasp my meaning, not my flesh.
Was warm beneath the covers till you pushed the tale away. You scuttled through a slit in time, squaring the black hole, bouncing and giggling, with echoes that run back to my heart.
I become visible, again I see a lush garden. Not again, not again. The ground trembles with your rushing strides. To me? Away?
Again attracted by the way I weave, you are always the tear. I'm the thread.
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15 comments:
This is just superb! I love the touch of the surreal, and you have a unique style with your prose: the poetry seeps from every line.
Hi Kerry-
So happy to have found your blog, loved being able to participate...thanks!
A stunning piece of prose Lyn....and the last line I can so relate to....love this! :-)
THIS is BRILLIANT. Love "you are always the tear. I'm the thread." Wow, what a singular voice you have. I look forward to reading more.
touched deeply by this piece Lyn xxo
Hi Carrie-
This was a piece that just poured out..as sometimes happens...thank you!
Hi Sherry-
Thanks for the lovely comment..and welcome!!
Hi Jeane-
So pleased with your wonderful comment...thank you..
you are always the tear. I'm the thread. Love this
Hi turtlememoir-
Thanks so much for your kind words...and for the visit!!
Oooh I too loved this, especially "Again attracted by the way I weave, you are always the tear. I'm the thread." What a line! Good to meet you Lyn. :-)
Hi Susanna-
So good to hear from you too...it's funny how a line can become a favorite...thank you!!
Wow, this one just sucks me right in and insists I read it again and again! I love the dual feeling of vulnerability and arrogance... I just love this. Very interesting way of putting together prose!
Hi Dori-
Yes, this is a very interesting way to come up with prose..write a poem!! Thanks..
Yes yes! Truly a heart's outpouring.
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