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Once again, joining Willow at Magpie Tales for another enigmatic prompt! For a real treat, do check out all the other participants...
CLOCKWORK
I was standing at the edge
of the biggest watch
in the world, which a minute ago
seemed ordinary
when it was tucked into Newton's pocket.
The watch fell out and grew and grew
as if it were a conquering Goliath,
and beckoned:
Have no fear, just fall into me.
So I tumbled like Alice
diving into Mr. Carroll's epic.
As I slid I wondered if a renowned author
was composing me to last forever too.
I asked the cliched question,
"What time is it ?"
Time itself answered me,
chiming a measured beat.
Springs and gears spun under my feet.
I wandered within a playing field
where I twirled on the second hand,
and kicked a minute to outer space.
I got hold of an hour and pulled time to a halt,
causing a breath to die tomorrow
instead of today.
A tiny hammer lifted to strike me,
as I became one with time.
Wound up by God,
I'm still ticking
in the clockwork universe.
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38 comments:
Welcome back, Lyn!
Profound, surreal and philosophical!
Hi Derrick-
Thanks for the welcome! Jumping back in...
I enjoyed your Magpie today ... it's fascinating to see how many different poems and prose can be written ~ from one tiny prompt.
Hi Helen-
Thank you..as long as we can keep on being inspired!!
Nice about your return and that you are still playing well with these prompts...this one a brilliant romp!
Hi Mary Ann-
Thanks for dropping by and the comment..Love the new photo, very stylish!!
wicked cool magpie..love the surreal imagery...as if it were a dream or a childrens tale as you suggest...
Oh, there is lots to think about in this one, Lyn. Thank you!
Hi Brian-
Thanks..I did sort of let this take its own path!
Hi Catalyst-
Grateful for your comment..I do like to dig into these prompts!!
Love this kind of time travel -- very Lewis Carroll-ish! Waiting for it to be adapted into a movie by Tim Burton.
Hi Vicki-
Thank you..you sure think big! Tim Burton, only if Johnny Depp is part of the deal!!
Lynn,
Impressive...kept my mind moving, like studying a Salvador Dali painting. And I thought about some minutes I'd like to kick to outer space.
rel
wonderful tale,
nice to meet.
Hi rel..
Thank you..I think a melting Dali watch would be just the ticket!
Hi Jingle-
Thanks for the comment..nice to meet you too..
deep, philosophical, playful and whimsical at the same time. I REALLY enjoyed it. :)
Hi Lisa-
So glad for your response..I enjoyed doing this prompt!
Lyn
Wonderful! My mind is still spinning with Alice in a surreal out of time sort of place where clocks tick forward and tick backwards and it is all the same.... "as I became one with time."
Joanny
nice to have you back :) this is wonderful feeling very surreal xxo
Hi Joanny-
Thank you...it's fun being Alice!!
Hi Jeane-
Thanks..glad to be back..and bringing surrealism with me!!
Wow, Lyn, killer last line! Love this. LOVE it!!
Hi Willow-
Thanks to you..keep 'em coming, oh mighty leader!!
Dali, the Bible, Newton, Carroll, Pascal and maybe even Bradbury...your poem echos with imagery from the ages.
Great tale, Lyn :)
marinela x x
Hi steviewren-
Quite a list! Thank you..definitely will take Bradbury!!
Hi Marinela-
Thank you..so glad you liked it!
Ah that's a fantastic take. Completely nonsensical yet full of hidden truths!
Welcome back!
Hi Peter-
Thanks so much..I'm right there when it comes to nonsense!
Glad to be back...
Really like it - I'm here from Jingle
I see a faint glimpse of a white rabbit and hear I'm late....
Thanks
Hi Leslie-
Thank you for your very kind comment...will have to get on board one of these days...but I'm late!!!
I went through your write-up, and am like 'WOW'...it's lovely.
I'm just a blog away;
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/
I've got very heart-touching poems you sure will love.
Nicely done.... Hope U've seen my previous comment.
I added your blog to the blogs I follow, feel free to add mine.
http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/
Hi Odiomo-
Thanks for visiting..and comments..will return the favor!!
Hi Odiomo-
Yes, thanks for comments! and adding my blog..very nice of you!!
Ediomo!! Sorry for the misspelling!!!
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