DEJA' VU
That was just a bit of deja' vu
swimming by,
a split second of flotsam
and jetsam
that grabbed my energy
in a
beam me up moment.
Disappeared so quickly,
left me holding the line,
trying to hook that lost instant
before it turned into a dead fish
once more...
and then what?
If I stop the clock
at that take,
would I,could I,
play it any differently,
or
be left to wait for the black hole
to regurgitate again,
serve up another enigma,
leaving me to my eternal confusion?
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12 comments:
wow! you captured it so well! xxo
Hi Lyn,
Sometimes we seem so sure - but don't know why. Not so much fun being left with the dead fish!
Hi Jeane-
Thank you..sometimes deja vu can be very annoying!
Hi Derrick-
Yes, sometimes that feeling really seems like the truth..twice told! I'll remove the fish..
Hi Lyn,
You are probably pulling my leg but just need to say, I didn't intend you to change any of the wording!
Also meant to say yesterday that I noticed the new colour scheme. Nice!
Hi Derrick-
Thanks again! I think I know you didn't mean to make changes...
Trying new colors, may not be done yet! Springtime needs a change..
Out the door now to run in the park again..Hurray..70+ degrees today!!
I really enjoyed where this piece took my imagination -- visually very engaging, surrealistic, I liked this...
...rob
Image & Verse
The image is splendid...
...rob
Image & Verse
Hi Rob-
Thanks for your comment..The whole experience is so mysterious!
Rob-
Thanks again!! Looking forward to viewing your blog, again!!
Creative.
Hi Jim-
So glad that you visited..thanks!
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