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Where are her footsteps?
She just glides over and shrieks
whenever it snows.
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44 comments:
Happy Snow!
Hi Helen-
Same to you!!
Maybe she's a ghost that glides and shrieks over the snow or is there something else supernatural happening here.
I wish I could, I wish I could! Nice piece...
It's always with regret that i make the first footprints in the snow - love this Magpie
Nice!!!
Enjoy the snow... for me it is summer time :)
cheers from Uruguay
Hi Windsmoke-
Nope, that's about it! But sometimes she tells jokes!!!
Hi Tumblewords-
Thanks for visiting, and the comment!
Hi madamebutterfly-
Thanks, but I never have to worry about that...woooo!!
Hi Gabriela-
I sure wish that summer was coming around for me too, but soon enough, as time flies! Thanks...
I love the unstated here--who is SHE? The wind, the season, a ghost, an unwanted visitor, even herself? It would be totally different with even one more word--as it is, perfection.
snow....you made it sound so magical
...and a bit mysterious
lovely wonders.
a magical tale with only a few words.
well done.
Hi hedgewitch-
Exactly as I meant it to be! Thank you so much..
Hi Suz-
Thanks..mysterious..my cup of tea!!
Hi Jingle-
I like the way you express yourself...thanks!
shrieks....yikes! i think my cat wishes she could glide over...
Hi Brian-
A cat..good idea..I'd paws for that!
Very nice! I love snow without footprints in it, and stormy weather.
Funny I can relate to the shrieking part. I love your blog.
Oh Hah! I know that person- I used to work with her and she paniced over a single snow flake!
Great post!
Hi Angie-
I too love storms..raging weather..as long as I'm inside!
Hi Kristen-
Thanks so much..I used to be a bit of a shrieker myself!
Hi Kathew-
Thanks..snow is lovely before it's slush..and then...waiting for spring...
Now... that is spooky..
now that's just plain cool!
Hi Steve-
Glad you think so! Thanks...
Wonderfully descriptive and powerful! Love it!
haha - no cold feet for this gal! Fun haiku, it could express something different each time your read it.
Very mysterious!
So many reasons why her footsteps may not be there and so many possible "she's" spring to mind!
I like to think its someone who slides through the snow like a child rather than making such a grown up thing as footsteps!
Hi Raph-
So pleased that you enjoyed this..thank you!!
Hi Jennifer-
Thank you...that's very interesting, and I'm glad it does change!!
Hi Words a Day-
Indeed, who is "she"? Like the way you see it!!
Your blog is like a sensual & artistic puzzle!! Thanx for comment & for being there in my Wabi & Sabi world !!!
And don't forget this.....
Never worry about the size of your Christian tree. In the eyes of children, they are all 30 feet tall.....
Peace & Love
Agneta
Hi Agneta-
What nice things you say!!
You're so right about children..they all have the true spirit..would that they could hold on to it forever!!
Hi Pauline-
Thanks for your kind words!!
Short poems always make you think what is the big message in the lonely three lines. Liked it! Relates to my winter mood!
Hi scentofmyheart-
Thank you..I find that 3 lines contain more than some long running poems..part of the fun!
A metaphor for the wonder in us all?
Hi Paul-
I really like the different interpretations of this..everyone's right!
very eerie makes me wonder who she is....
Hi Amanda-
Eerie is good..I don't know who she is either!! Thanks...
Chilling and beautiful Lyn! :-)
Hi Carrie-
So glad that you enjoyed this bit of chill!!
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