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PRELUDE
Norman Bates fell in love. Her name was Bonnie. He tested her name. What a nice name. What a nice Mrs. Bates she would make. Bonnie Bates. It just rolled off his tongue. Bonnie Bates. Not as nice as Mommy's name. Of course. Not as nice as Betty Bates. Of course. But sort of like part of a song. Bonnie Bates. Betty Bates. His Mom asked him what he was humming. Just a song I'm making up Mommy, sort of a love song, you know.
Bonnie was in his senior class and Norman sent her messages that hovered over her head. Peonies and pierced red hearts, he prayed the powers above would let his love drop into her virgin mind. Bonnie knew that she would be his bride. Norman could tell by how she blushed.
Bonnie came to the Bates Motel. Norman asked her to wave to Mommy, rocking at the front window. Dust filtered the view. There she sat every afternoon. Her favorite place before the sun went down, and Norman helped her to her room. But tonight would be different. Tonight Norman would introduce her to his bride.
He shifted his weight to open the door, and carried Bonnie across the threshold. Mommy, he called, I have a surprise for you.
Heart pounding in anticipation of their honeymoon, Norman had in mind a special treat for his bride. He hastened up the stairs to prepare a bath for Bonnie Bates.
Wash away any sins, little Bonnie; he hummed a new part of his song. He placed her in the bubbles, let her feet rise to the rim, polished her toes like he did Mommy's, and sang the rest of the song. Bonnie Bates, Bonnie Bates. Not as nice as Mommy. Not as nice as Betty Bates.
Once again, thank you Willow for this prompt. We never know when inspiration will raise its lovely head!! Please attend to all the other Magpies!!!
45 comments:
Ick!! This gave me the most delicious shivery shivers!! A willy of a Magpie!!
Hi Willow-
How can I thank you? It's the toes that did it for me!!
stunning theme,
well cooked meal!
This was such a unique take on Willow's photo .... I actually read it three times. Wonderful!
Shivers and goosebumps! Great magpie, Lyn!
Out-hitchcocking Hitchcock!
Oh this is brilliant, from beginning to end, a complete piece in itself, that voice is done so well its still in my head! Bonnie Bates, Bonnie Bates...
this is one of the best magpies i've read. well done!
Great Lyn! I watched a programme on TV last night about the attempted assassination of Ronald Reagan and the psychological makeup of the culprit (who stalked Jodie Foster) could have been your Norman!
Creepy! :)
Hi Jingle-
Thanks so much..I thought it might be fun to meet Norman again!
Hi Helen-
Three times..I'm flattered..I did have fun, though!!
Hi Angie-
Glad you had that reaction!! Thanks...
Hi Doctor FTSE-
No higher praise!! Thank you...
Hi Words a Day-
I think that Norman is always lurking, ready to make an appearance...boo!!
Hi Derrick-
I guess that "psychos" like Norman will always be with us.."My Norman"!!
Hi Jinksy-
Creepy is good!! He may be back...
Wasn't that Norman a killer-of-a-guy? Or WHAT!
Splendid "take on Willow's prompt. She has the greatest thing going here...
Hi Steveroni-
Yes..thank goodness for the Prompts..none of this stuff would see the light of day, if not...
This is a like a fairy tale, a seemingly and all to happy tale, underlaid by a solemn and unnerving darkness. The profound subtlety of your language is amazing.
Hi Sam-
Thank you! Just my little fantasy of early days of "Psycho"!!
Oh dear god! Here showers have creeped me out ever since I saw Psycho about 50 years ago -- now tub baths aren't safe either. Arrgh!
(Really nice Magpie, of course!)
Hi Vicki-
No movie spooked me like Psycho..obviously still haven't gotten over it! Thanks...
gasp - this gave me shivers - dark magpie you cooked there…
my magpie is here
i think i may hear that song when i next sleep...ha. nicely done...shivers....
my magpie
Lyn,
Dang it I was right back there watching Norman and getting the willies all over again!
Perfect Magpie Baits.
rel
Hi Claudia-
Dark? That happens to me every once in a while!!
Hi Brian-
It is a cute little ditty, isn't it? Thanks, Brian....
Hi rel-
Little Norman had to start somewhere..could be there's a tale that goes back to kindergarten!!hahaha...
When I read the first two words, Norman's name, I knew we'd be in for a wild ride. Very good!
Lyn you gave me goosebumps in this amazing piece! Wonderful and chilling Magpie! :-)
Hi Berowne-
Thanks for visiting..It gives me great pleasure when my friends get chills at the first 2 words!!
Hi Carrie-
Thanks, Carrie..there are some memories that are just there forever..Hitchcock anyone?
gorgeous
beautiful
wonderful
amazing
fabulous
magical
magnificent
stunning
superb
fantastic
..... and just soo
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..... I love your blog & blues!
Agneta, a swedish one ;)
Hi Agneta-
I am humbled by all this praise..blushing..thank you!
An excellently creepy tale.
Hi Linda-
Sometimes I just get in the mood to be creepy! Can't help myself..thanks!!
Knowing what we now know about Mr Bates, this is one of the scariest pieces I've read for a long time. But, oh, so delightful! :-) Many thanks.
Greetings from London.
This is my type of tale, awesome.
Greetings to a Cuban-
Thank you..I think I scared myself!
Hi Urban Cowboy-
Thank you..I thoroughly understand your taste!!
Norman rises again! :) How well you wrote this new chapter of his. Chilly-creepy.
whoa, awesome. I love this, the creepiness totally fits with the pic and norman bates is one of the coolest bad guys out there. you did a great job.
Hi Tumblewords-
You can't keep a good man down! Thanks for your visit...
Hi Patience-
Thanks so much..it's fun to meet up with this guy, every once in a while!
creepy!
good post.
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