Wednesday, March 23, 2011

MONDAY'S CHILD #38


                                                     Illustration/ Fernando Falcone

The Tea Party.  Alice in Wonderland.  Wish I was there.  Leave it to Monday's Child #38 ,which asks us to write a piece for children.  Which character would I be ?  Who do I relate to the most?  Let's see....


A GIRL NAMED ALICE

I am the other Alice,
not the famous one in Wonderland.
But just a girl
who, day after day,
keeps falling down a rabbit hole.

You'd think I'd be
a bit more careful by now,
but the hole keeps moving around
in a most magical sort of way.

So there I go
tumbling
down
again.

And when I see
a shiny pocket watch
in a White Rabbit's grasp,
I know it's time to reach for the key,

open the door
to the garden once more,

through which I'll fit
when I take a sip of "Drink Me",
in my very own Wonderland.


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8 comments:

  1. love, love, love this Lyn! truly you are the other Alice xo

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  2. Hi Jeane-
    Thanks.. That's me, always climbing out of the hole...``

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  3. I'm a Monday's Child - (well I share it with my twin!). Nice characterization.

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  4. Hi Lena-
    A twin! Divine! I'm a Wednesday child.."is full of woe"..so not true about me...

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  5. This is as lovely as it could be Lyn!!

    Beautiful imagery- can I join you this time? I believe that drink me would be enough for two of us!

    Alician Hugs xoxox

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  6. Hi Olivia-
    I love the Alician Hugs..very nice..thanks!!

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  7. Lyn

    this is a marvelous creation of a whimsical and creative mind. C.S. Lewis would be honored and so would the other Alice.

    Have a nice week end.

    Joanny

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  8. Hi joanny-
    What a generous statement!!Thank you..and I believe that you're referring to C.L. Dodgson/ Lewis Carroll..I'm in very good company!!

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