Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Hawk....



HAIKU

My soul a feather
of the white hawk that defends
a full, drumming heart.


This is my first submission to One Shot Wednesday.  Anything that gets me to write more poetry is OK in my book.  So thanks to those who clued me in. Will try to make you proud.  And bloggers, this site's for you!!  Go to the One Shot site for details, please...


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25 comments:

  1. Ben LanghinrichsOctober 6, 2010 at 10:50 AM

    Nice job with the haiku. There is plenty of bad haiku out there (I write some myself), so it is a pleasure to read a good one. Welcome to One Shot.

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  2. Everyday GoddessOctober 6, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    beautiful connections, one shot wednesday is very fun!

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  3. dustusOctober 6, 2010 at 11:28 AM

    Elements of a musical heart, nature, and soul. Cool Haiku.

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  4. Brian MillerOctober 6, 2010 at 11:47 AM

    nice. great to see you at one shot lyn, used to popping in on the magpie trail....

    keep defending that heart...nice write.

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  5. Blue Sky DreamingOctober 6, 2010 at 12:31 PM

    Felt it all the way to my bones...good writing for sure!!

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  6. Desert RoseOctober 6, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    that haiku is just too beautiful! touched my soul..:)

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  7. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:09 PM

    Hi Ben-
    What a nice welcome..I look forward to reading your haiku! Thank you...

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  8. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    Hi Everyday Goddess-
    So nice to see you here..lovely to meet old friends!!

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  9. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:12 PM

    Hi dustus-
    I guess we're all a bit complex..thanks for the insight!

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  10. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:14 PM

    Hi Brian-
    Thanks for your welcome..spotted your name and said, this must be the place to be!!

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  11. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:17 PM

    Hi Mary Ann-
    Always happy to see that I have a positive effect..thanks so much!

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  12. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 1:18 PM

    Hi Desert Rose-
    Who could ask for more? I so appreciate your kind words...

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  13. AnonymousOctober 6, 2010 at 2:45 PM

    Congrats on a lovely haiku and your first one shot.
    Victoria

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  14. UnknownOctober 6, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    Is there no end to your talent Ms.R?! Keep on drumming.

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  15. Shashidhar SharmaOctober 6, 2010 at 4:36 PM

    what a beautiful image that you have crated with your Haiku...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  16. BubbaOctober 6, 2010 at 5:09 PM

    Saying more with less is always a challenge, which you met so wonderfully with this One Shot haiku.

    (I'm a fan of the 5-7-5 form and have an unconventional blog: Haiku Koo-Koo)

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  17. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    Hi Victoria-
    I do indeed feel welcomed..thank you so much!

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  18. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 6:06 PM

    Hi Mama Zen-
    What a nice thing to say!!

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  19. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 6:09 PM

    Hi Derrick-
    I do sort of turn up, don't I? End to my talent...aaargghhh...

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  20. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 6:14 PM

    Hi Shashi-
    Love haiku..the fewer the words, the more we have to tell the truth..thank you..
    Namaste'

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  21. LynOctober 6, 2010 at 6:16 PM

    Hi Eric-
    Thanks so much..can't wait to visit your very original sounding Blog!!

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  22. Jeane MyersOctober 6, 2010 at 11:22 PM

    what a strong picture - wonderful :)

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  23. LynOctober 7, 2010 at 6:45 AM

    Hi Jeane-
    Always a pleasure to hear from you..thanks!

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  24. Wild RoseOctober 7, 2010 at 10:32 AM

    Beautiful haiku and nice oneshot..

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  25. LynOctober 7, 2010 at 11:11 AM

    Hi Wild Rose-
    Thank you..I so enjoyed doing this!

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Enter! So happy that you're here. I read every comment, will answer, and look forward to meeting you. Welcome!