Tuesday, September 28, 2010

A Little Haiku...



ADD A LITTLE HAIKU TO YOUR LIFE

Droning bee strokes wings
on petal, flies from orchid...
stinger pointing out. 





Ice cubes bounce in glass,
bubbles rise like pink balloons...
my mouth tastes gaiety.


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14 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 28, 2010 at 10:08 AM

    very beautiful words.

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  2. LynSeptember 28, 2010 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Jingle-
    Always, thanks for your kind words..

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  3. UnknownSeptember 28, 2010 at 11:00 AM

    Hi Lyn,

    Love the gaiety in the pink balloon bubbles!

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  4. Blue Sky DreamingSeptember 28, 2010 at 11:18 AM

    Great line "my mouth tastes gaiety"!
    Struck a memory cord for me...where is the soda...need some ice too!

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  5. LynSeptember 28, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    Hi Derrick-
    There's something about bubbly..could use some now!

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  6. LynSeptember 28, 2010 at 11:46 AM

    Hi Mary Ann-
    I think we should just have a party! This grey day needs a boost!!

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  7. Jeane MyersSeptember 28, 2010 at 12:30 PM

    touchdown with the second one! xxo

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  8. LynSeptember 28, 2010 at 1:48 PM

    Hi Jeane-
    Thanks..that seems to be the general consensus!

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  9. Everyday GoddessSeptember 28, 2010 at 8:48 PM

    hooray, gaiety on the tongue! never too late for birthday wishes!xo

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  10. LynSeptember 28, 2010 at 9:16 PM

    Hi Everyday Goddess-
    Thanks..I'll get the glasses..time to celebrate!!

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  11. A Cuban In LondonSeptember 29, 2010 at 4:27 AM

    Ouch! That last line caught me! :-)

    Greetings from London.

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  12. RallentandaSeptember 29, 2010 at 10:36 AM

    I have always loved poetry about drinks.

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  13. LynSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:25 AM

    Greetings to a Cuban-
    It seems as if a few folks think so...thank you..

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  14. LynSeptember 29, 2010 at 11:29 AM

    Hi Rallentanda-
    I think I'll compile an anthropology on your favorite poetry!! Thanks for visiting..

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