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RESTORATION 101
Here it is, the canvas of my life.
Time for maintenance.
It's better to sweep
a wide swathe of detritus away,
than to paper over
all the mistakes of the past.
I grab a useful brush,
not unlike the toothy kind,
and scrape against the accumulated plaque.
Then spray a scent to cover my exhalation,
as if fragrance itself equals
a cleansing.
Now the image of my years
is spread before me.
I try to float the dust
out of well worn crevices,
like Sisyphus pushing a ton of rubbish uphill.
Did he reach the top?
A rolling stone seeks its level
and gravity triumphs against a wanting soul,
no matter how serious the intent to win.
Whatever winning is.
Here's the likeness, brush it clean.
What seems a sketchy existence
stubbornly clings like skin.
Down on my hands and knees I go,
scrubbing,
like some indentured servant.
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One more time, I'd like to thank Willow at magpie tales for being a weekly inspiration to all of us in Blogland. I certainly look forward to one more enigmatic photo, from which springs....
and by the time you are finished scrubbing it will be time to start all over again...like sisyphus...nice magpie. great imagery...
ReplyDeleteWouldn't it be lovely if we could actually restore ourselves with the mere sweep of a brush?
ReplyDeleteYour Magpie is wonderful!
Hi Brian-
ReplyDeleteOh no..not all over again!!Thanks so much, Brian...
Hi Helen-
ReplyDeleteThank you..I am looking for a new way!! And easy, too!
Sometimes, maybe it is just better to paper over the past. Sweep the dust under the rug. :) Love this!
ReplyDelete'like Sisyphus pushing a ton of rubbish uphill.'
ReplyDeleteThis is such a brilliant image. And to pair it up with brushing your teeth is genius. Many thanks.
Greetings from London.
Hi Tumblewords-
ReplyDeleteThanks..I'll probably continue to do both!!
Greetings to a Cuban-
ReplyDeleteThank you..more than kind!Love to stretch the metaphors!!
Wonderful! I'm voting for papering over and like the others have said... the Sisyphus imagery is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteoh my-lovely Magpie
ReplyDeleteHi Mary Ann-
ReplyDeleteI think I'll try self hypnosis next time...Thanks!
Hi kathew-
ReplyDeleteSo nice of you...thanks!
my face has been so many me's i can barely remember all of them!
ReplyDeleteexcellent magging!
Indentured servant is a brilliant ending!! Wonderful, Lyn!!
ReplyDeleteHi Everyday Goddess-
ReplyDeleteYou and me both! Very good, thanks!
Hi Willow-
ReplyDeleteBeing the shaggy dog I am, that last line was what I was aiming for!! Leave it to you...Thanks a mil...
Lyn,
ReplyDeleteare we doomed to strive for something new and different? Beautiful discription of our obscessions.
rel
Hi rel-
ReplyDeleteI think that's our nature..Just trying to clean up my act, I guess..I'll try again tomorrow! Thanks so much...
I love the last line! Very introspective.
ReplyDeleteHi T-
ReplyDeleteThank you..sometimes things just sort of float in..
Hi Lyn,
ReplyDeleteIt's all super but I particularly like the second and fourth stanzas and, of course, the last line!
Hi Derrick-
ReplyDeleteThank you..I'm happy to come up with anything!
Beautiful metaphor, poignant and eternally truthful. Your writing and your philosophy resonate deeply.
ReplyDeleteLyn
ReplyDeleteThis is simply an amazing poem I love the way it flows and the words you use -- it has an imaginary ethereal feel of a soul in ancient Greece that fall from heaven.
Joanny
Hi Sam-
ReplyDeleteYou are so gracious..I really appreciate your comments, Sam..thank you.
Hi joanny-
ReplyDeleteI love your insight, the way it builds up my poem..thank you!
uniquely descriptive magpie!
ReplyDeleteHi soundoffreedom-
ReplyDeleteThank you..I do find the prompts to be quite stimulating!
Such wonderful imagery! Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteHi Vicki-
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words...