Monday, April 19, 2010

MAGPIE/ Prompt #10

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Once again, joining Willow at Magpie Tales for another enigmatic prompt!  For a real treat, do check out all the other participants...


CLOCKWORK

I was standing at the edge
of the biggest watch
in the world, which a minute ago
seemed ordinary
when it was tucked into Newton's pocket.

The watch fell out and grew and grew
as if it were a conquering Goliath,
and beckoned:

Have no fear, just fall into me.

So I tumbled like Alice
diving into Mr. Carroll's epic.
As I slid I wondered if a renowned author
was composing me to last forever too.

I asked the cliched question,
"What time is it ?"

Time itself answered me,
chiming a measured beat.
Springs and gears spun under my feet.

I wandered within a playing field
where I twirled on the second hand,
and kicked a minute to outer space.
I got hold of an hour and pulled time to a halt,
causing a breath to die tomorrow
instead of today.

A tiny hammer lifted to strike me,
as I became one with time.
Wound up by God,
I'm still ticking
in the clockwork universe.


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38 comments:

  1. Welcome back, Lyn!

    Profound, surreal and philosophical!

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  2. Hi Derrick-
    Thanks for the welcome! Jumping back in...

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  3. I enjoyed your Magpie today ... it's fascinating to see how many different poems and prose can be written ~ from one tiny prompt.

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  4. Hi Helen-
    Thank you..as long as we can keep on being inspired!!

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  5. Nice about your return and that you are still playing well with these prompts...this one a brilliant romp!

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  6. Hi Mary Ann-
    Thanks for dropping by and the comment..Love the new photo, very stylish!!

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  7. wicked cool magpie..love the surreal imagery...as if it were a dream or a childrens tale as you suggest...

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  8. Oh, there is lots to think about in this one, Lyn. Thank you!

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  9. Hi Brian-
    Thanks..I did sort of let this take its own path!

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  10. Hi Catalyst-
    Grateful for your comment..I do like to dig into these prompts!!

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  11. Love this kind of time travel -- very Lewis Carroll-ish! Waiting for it to be adapted into a movie by Tim Burton.

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  12. Hi Vicki-
    Thank you..you sure think big! Tim Burton, only if Johnny Depp is part of the deal!!

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  13. Lynn,
    Impressive...kept my mind moving, like studying a Salvador Dali painting. And I thought about some minutes I'd like to kick to outer space.
    rel

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  14. Hi rel..
    Thank you..I think a melting Dali watch would be just the ticket!

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  15. Hi Jingle-
    Thanks for the comment..nice to meet you too..

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  17. deep, philosophical, playful and whimsical at the same time. I REALLY enjoyed it. :)

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  18. Hi Lisa-
    So glad for your response..I enjoyed doing this prompt!

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  19. Lyn

    Wonderful! My mind is still spinning with Alice in a surreal out of time sort of place where clocks tick forward and tick backwards and it is all the same.... "as I became one with time."

    Joanny

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  20. nice to have you back :) this is wonderful feeling very surreal xxo

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  21. Hi Joanny-
    Thank you...it's fun being Alice!!

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  22. Hi Jeane-
    Thanks..glad to be back..and bringing surrealism with me!!

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  23. Wow, Lyn, killer last line! Love this. LOVE it!!

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  24. Hi Willow-
    Thanks to you..keep 'em coming, oh mighty leader!!

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  25. Dali, the Bible, Newton, Carroll, Pascal and maybe even Bradbury...your poem echos with imagery from the ages.

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  26. Hi steviewren-
    Quite a list! Thank you..definitely will take Bradbury!!

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  27. Hi Marinela-
    Thank you..so glad you liked it!

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  28. Ah that's a fantastic take. Completely nonsensical yet full of hidden truths!
    Welcome back!

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  29. Hi Peter-
    Thanks so much..I'm right there when it comes to nonsense!
    Glad to be back...

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  30. Really like it - I'm here from Jingle
    I see a faint glimpse of a white rabbit and hear I'm late....

    Thanks

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  31. Hi Leslie-
    Thank you for your very kind comment...will have to get on board one of these days...but I'm late!!!

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  32. I went through your write-up, and am like 'WOW'...it's lovely.


    I'm just a blog away;

    http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/
    I've got very heart-touching poems you sure will love.

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  33. Nicely done.... Hope U've seen my previous comment.

    I added your blog to the blogs I follow, feel free to add mine.
    http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/

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  34. Hi Odiomo-
    Thanks for visiting..and comments..will return the favor!!

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  35. Hi Odiomo-
    Yes, thanks for comments! and adding my blog..very nice of you!!

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  36. Ediomo!! Sorry for the misspelling!!!

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Enter! So happy that you're here. I read every comment, will answer, and look forward to meeting you. Welcome!