tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post4720194243548940110..comments2023-09-26T07:29:39.334-04:00Comments on Two Ghosts: MAGPIE/ Prompt #24Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-47788972632025859512010-07-31T17:02:54.938-04:002010-07-31T17:02:54.938-04:00Hi Jim-
Thanks so much..I did have a bit of fun ...Hi Jim-<br /> Thanks so much..I did have a bit of fun with this!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-41784037684766483372010-07-31T15:39:37.973-04:002010-07-31T15:39:37.973-04:00A great ending.A great ending.Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-45098188110789685662010-07-27T20:38:42.781-04:002010-07-27T20:38:42.781-04:00Hi Suz-
Thanks so much..I like it out loud..gets...Hi Suz-<br /> Thanks so much..I like it out loud..gets rid of some agression!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-66611919042592335192010-07-27T20:02:27.303-04:002010-07-27T20:02:27.303-04:00oh the ending...loved it
and yes it reads outloud ...oh the ending...loved it<br />and yes it reads outloud very nicelySuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-24544647266313192742010-07-27T17:16:28.044-04:002010-07-27T17:16:28.044-04:00Hi Sandra-
Thanks for visiting!Hi Sandra-<br /> Thanks for visiting!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-58155008006069860882010-07-27T16:14:07.127-04:002010-07-27T16:14:07.127-04:00Splendid!Splendid!Sandra Rönnlövhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18156375076508074264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-80830833144857594752010-07-27T11:45:18.182-04:002010-07-27T11:45:18.182-04:00Hi C.L.Smith-
I really appreciate what you have t...Hi C.L.Smith-<br /> I really appreciate what you have to say. I know that there's a beat in my writing, an internal rhythm that I do hope others discover..so I thank you..I'm always tapping my toes!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-75494804881141350202010-07-27T11:23:23.759-04:002010-07-27T11:23:23.759-04:00Lyn, I really like the rhythm and energy of your p...Lyn, I really like the rhythm and energy of your poem. And your use of assonance and consonance as a way of linking lines together..as in "under the rumple of the sheet" and the way "hand" is echoed in the later sounds of "expanse" and "last." I'm always interested in the way the sounds of words reflect their meaning, as they seem to do in those lines.<br /><br />Anyhoo, I look forward to reading more.C.L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040522403393233000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-7544119568615693122010-07-27T07:45:38.770-04:002010-07-27T07:45:38.770-04:00Hi rel-
Thanks for visiting..
For this guy, ...Hi rel-<br /> Thanks for visiting..<br /> For this guy, I think it is..and then running??Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-54230299666832639142010-07-27T07:22:41.285-04:002010-07-27T07:22:41.285-04:00Sometimes the fun is in the hiding. ;)
relSometimes the fun is in the hiding. ;)<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-79776462260376286152010-07-26T10:32:39.649-04:002010-07-26T10:32:39.649-04:00Hi Friko-
And thanks for your visit!! Not all r...Hi Friko-<br /> And thanks for your visit!! Not all relationships run smoothly! Will check yours again...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-76594087518159000862010-07-26T09:51:33.588-04:002010-07-26T09:51:33.588-04:00This could almost follow on from mine.
I like the ...This could almost follow on from mine.<br />I like the poem, I like the idea of the hidden one, the playfulness of the interaction and the pleasures to come.<br /><br />Thank you for visiting my blog.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-73770130817679819622010-07-26T07:21:33.969-04:002010-07-26T07:21:33.969-04:00Hi little hat-
Thanks ...I'm glad it worked....Hi little hat-<br /> Thanks ...I'm glad it worked..I thought that there would be many more "serious" and brilliant responses!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-80984005078832889992010-07-26T07:18:42.567-04:002010-07-26T07:18:42.567-04:00Hi spacedlaw-
Thank you..I can see that, and who...Hi spacedlaw-<br /> Thank you..I can see that, and who am I to say NO to a ghost?Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-54449980265359013992010-07-26T05:01:23.277-04:002010-07-26T05:01:23.277-04:00Loved the lightness and the whimsy.Loved the lightness and the whimsy.Steve Capelinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838386764407644146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-10098462494941242202010-07-26T03:00:59.449-04:002010-07-26T03:00:59.449-04:00I thought of a ghost, a fluffy ghost hidden in the...I thought of a ghost, a fluffy ghost hidden in the sheets.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-29644058399336236412010-07-25T14:55:33.280-04:002010-07-25T14:55:33.280-04:00Hi Lena-
Thank you- pre-nups...leave it to a poe...Hi Lena-<br /> Thank you- pre-nups...leave it to a poet to know!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-5888705723522389362010-07-25T14:06:58.688-04:002010-07-25T14:06:58.688-04:00That was sweet - it sort of took me back to my ear...That was sweet - it sort of took me back to my early-years' marriage....I should have presented a pre-nup back then, too....!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-5240172070142734082010-07-25T13:51:02.557-04:002010-07-25T13:51:02.557-04:00Hi Christine-
Thanks for visiting..I guess she t...Hi Christine-<br /> Thanks for visiting..I guess she thinks she wins..but..maybe not smoothe sailing!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-33627933727800975252010-07-25T13:20:27.085-04:002010-07-25T13:20:27.085-04:00I wondered how this would end and when I got to it...I wondered how this would end and when I got to it I loved it and smiled!<br /><br />Christinechristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08720643762397784519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-22265508784282646992010-07-25T12:30:22.282-04:002010-07-25T12:30:22.282-04:00Thank you, Willow..I sort of have to have fun with...Thank you, Willow..I sort of have to have fun with serious implications!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-42990398737326183102010-07-25T11:35:20.389-04:002010-07-25T11:35:20.389-04:00Loved the playfulness of this one, Lyn. "Come...Loved the playfulness of this one, Lyn. "Come out, come out, wherever you are" is just perfect!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-32146879057813404282010-07-25T07:57:17.901-04:002010-07-25T07:57:17.901-04:00Hi Tumblewords-
Fun is good! Thanks..I've go...Hi Tumblewords-<br /> Fun is good! Thanks..I've got to go there when the iron is hot!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-19141611039853508042010-07-25T07:55:29.405-04:002010-07-25T07:55:29.405-04:00Hi Eric S-
Thanks for visiting..playing out as t...Hi Eric S-<br /> Thanks for visiting..playing out as the revised "Who's Afraid of Virginia Wolfe"?? Sort of my inspiration!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-72433743200735552762010-07-25T07:52:08.493-04:002010-07-25T07:52:08.493-04:00Hi bkm-
Thanks...Eternal bliss? Just a very goo...Hi bkm-<br /> Thanks...Eternal bliss? Just a very good pre-nup!!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.com