tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post4186538094106100690..comments2023-09-26T07:29:39.334-04:00Comments on Two Ghosts: LAST BREATH/ Poetry Potluck #48Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-20027570293541004532011-08-17T14:06:31.559-04:002011-08-17T14:06:31.559-04:00Hi Jingle-
Will definitely keep it up...thanks!Hi Jingle-<br /> Will definitely keep it up...thanks!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-80127273059518997332011-08-17T13:24:31.292-04:002011-08-17T13:24:31.292-04:00divine poetry,
keep it up.
Cheers.divine poetry,<br />keep it up.<br /><br />Cheers.Jingle Poetryhttp://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-81738904903458765762011-08-16T09:13:17.153-04:002011-08-16T09:13:17.153-04:00Hi Morning-
Good to hear from you..thanks for y...Hi Morning-<br /> Good to hear from you..thanks for your comment!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-1088814103166481042011-08-15T20:17:41.541-04:002011-08-15T20:17:41.541-04:00Banish tears from my pillow,
let your mouth taste ...Banish tears from my pillow,<br />let your mouth taste my words.<br /><br /><br />love the lines, well done!Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-41134732641826465122011-08-15T13:56:46.689-04:002011-08-15T13:56:46.689-04:00Hi PhotoDiction-
Happy that you enjoyed this..f...Hi PhotoDiction-<br /> Happy that you enjoyed this..fun to do!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-69641948246089773802011-08-15T13:54:21.826-04:002011-08-15T13:54:21.826-04:00Hi Melissa-
So glad you enjoyed this..liked find...Hi Melissa-<br /> So glad you enjoyed this..liked finding the different levels.Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-24235201808874045912011-08-15T13:48:04.623-04:002011-08-15T13:48:04.623-04:00Hi Kalyan-
Thank you for your generous words, th...Hi Kalyan-<br /> Thank you for your generous words, this was interesting to work on!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-89858889150660030832011-08-15T12:57:57.316-04:002011-08-15T12:57:57.316-04:00ahhh, summoning Sheherezade - always a good idea f...ahhh, summoning Sheherezade - always a good idea for establishing the tone of a poem about the sensoual! :o) Enjoyed this.Melissahttp://caridwen.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-59824307987671897972011-08-15T09:19:52.364-04:002011-08-15T09:19:52.364-04:00beautifully crafted words...really passionate!beautifully crafted words...really passionate!Kalyanhttp://icetrail.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-58591722745202424782011-08-15T08:15:04.657-04:002011-08-15T08:15:04.657-04:00Hi Chim's World...
Thank you so much..it was...Hi Chim's World...<br /> Thank you so much..it was really fun to do!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-55975589784105941422011-08-15T08:13:44.126-04:002011-08-15T08:13:44.126-04:00Hi Margie-
So pleased that you commented about ...Hi Margie-<br /> So pleased that you commented about this..always appreciate your words...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-61012836999216078552011-08-15T08:12:03.630-04:002011-08-15T08:12:03.630-04:00Hi Blue Sky-
So glad you liked this..I tried to...Hi Blue Sky-<br /> So glad you liked this..I tried to really "feel" this one!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-36482448549133584362011-08-15T08:10:43.987-04:002011-08-15T08:10:43.987-04:00Hi Marbles...
Thanks..I see it that way too!Hi Marbles...<br /> Thanks..I see it that way too!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-85991257680136186082011-08-15T08:09:21.179-04:002011-08-15T08:09:21.179-04:00Hi lynnaima-
Thank you so much...for me this poe...Hi lynnaima-<br /> Thank you so much...for me this poem was a walk with love and sometimes it feels like dying...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-35074826788834529152011-08-15T08:06:51.124-04:002011-08-15T08:06:51.124-04:00Very vivid and lovely, it so captures the feel of ...Very vivid and lovely, it so captures the feel of two lovers caught up in passion. I especially like 'as if Scheherezade lived under my skin' for lovers weave a multitude of stories. 'Let your mouth taste my words' is especially sensual.PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-3118560827614432032011-08-15T06:22:22.741-04:002011-08-15T06:22:22.741-04:00this was a beautiful poem about lust, and longing....this was a beautiful poem about lust, and longing....its a sensual poem...great word bankChim's World of Literaturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08052021144209095350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-60421008261345852892011-08-14T23:48:19.694-04:002011-08-14T23:48:19.694-04:00Lyn, another writing that I really enjoyed!
*Bani...Lyn, another writing that I really enjoyed!<br /><br />*Banish tears from my pillow<br />let your mouth taste my words<br /><br />Beautiful and touching words.<br /><br />Margie :)Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-31341648872987586382011-08-14T23:43:40.011-04:002011-08-14T23:43:40.011-04:00Every line flows nicely...works for me! As said be...Every line flows nicely...works for me! As said before, a mix of sensual and longing!Blue Sky Dreaminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12405128176114875597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-23958996215185570522011-08-14T22:15:18.600-04:002011-08-14T22:15:18.600-04:00Wonderful writing! Sensual and longing at the same...Wonderful writing! Sensual and longing at the same time.<br /><br />Here's my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7078491749528166598.post-75177499985129779892011-08-14T22:08:59.275-04:002011-08-14T22:08:59.275-04:00stanza before last is so touching, with a little b...stanza before last is so touching, with a little bit of fragility to it, awesome word!! FELT!!!<br /><br />Enjoy the potluck!!!<br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/smokescreen/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com