MAGPIE...Prompt #133
SUMMER NIGHT/ 1913/ Albert Bloch
THANK YOU, Tess, for Magpie Tales....
BLUE MOON
Come closer, this
is the place of chance,
where once in a blue moon,
you can stumble past betrayal,
and call out a spell,
"belew, belew",
ancient chant,
duplicity, be gone.
Clouds of indgo ash,
a sky dimmed by stain.
Stay by my side, gaze,
see light tossed anew,
hope for the sun to rise
in seventh heaven.
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see light tossed anew and hope...love that closure....i tried looking up belew belew...it seems familiar but just out of my grasp...it adds a level of mystery and spirituality for me...
ReplyDeleteHi Brian-
ReplyDeleteBelew/belewe...archaic spelling ...1500's, for blue. Trivia!! Thanks so much.
oh the blue moon!!! love your indigo poem. :)
ReplyDeleteAm I belew? Ain't these tears in these eyes tellin' you? :-)
ReplyDeleteHi insanebloom-
ReplyDeleteYou are so welcome..thank you!!
Hi Berowne-
ReplyDeleteLeave it to yew!! Thanks a bunch!!
Belew! I love this. I actually had blue moon on the mind last night when I chose this pic. Very nice, Lyn.
ReplyDeleteReally lovely and so in sync with the images. I especially like the idea of the sky dimmed by stain.
ReplyDeleteHi Tess-
ReplyDeleteWent to a Blue Moon gathering Fri. night..a bit of hocus-pocus..and then your pic. Hmmm.
True believer!!
Hi junkthief-
ReplyDeleteI was very much on the wavelength of this image..a real gift..thank you so much!
I thought blue moon, too. I like the chant-like dance.
ReplyDeleteOoooh, loved it. "belew, belew" made me shiver.
ReplyDeleteHi Laurie-
ReplyDeleteI thought the Blue Moon theme was magical! Thanks so much...
Hi Ritva-
ReplyDeleteGlad it had that effect! Thank you...
I could actually "hear" these figures saying that word "belew", and sense the flirtatious coaxing to stay with them forever!
ReplyDeleteBlue in the night and heaven's touch with the sunrise. Rightly so, Lyn!
ReplyDeleteHank
Nice write!.. Blue moon, i even wnna sing it...
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Hi Rick-
ReplyDeleteThanks for turning this into a play!! You can stay!!
Hi Hank-
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comment...this pic was so interesting...
Hi JJRod'z-
ReplyDeleteAlways loved those golden oldies! Thank you...
Lovely, Ms. Lyn! "Blue Moon" is going to be playing in my head all day!!
ReplyDeleteYour words paint a lovely scene to behold!
ReplyDeleteBesides the ethereal qualities of the painting, you picked up on the archaic feeling of the figures and I love that you channeled your words through the mystic nuances of ancient
ReplyDeletetimes. Our 'blue moon' uneasiness is definitely connected to the spiritual naivety of the people who lived during middle ages. Awesome Lyn! Thank you for sharing.
magical indeed...thanks for this Lyn
ReplyDeleteAh your Blue Moon is vey different to mine. I like the way you've chosen the old chant and made us think of medieval mystery mingled with the indigo ash of a different bue moon.
ReplyDeleteI like this cncept of a spiritual " last chance saloon" , where the colour blue reigns and hope springs eternal, thanks Lyn !
ReplyDeleteHi Helen-
ReplyDeleteKnow what you mean...me too!! Thank you...
Hi Karen S.-
ReplyDeleteReally like your very kind comment..thanks so much!
Hi Linda-
ReplyDeleteThere seem to be so many spiritual connections in this one..and the middle ages...a treasure trove! thank you!
Hi Wayne-
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you, indeed, for your kind words!
Hi Little Nell-
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked the old connections, I'm definitely into that..thank you!
Hi Kutamun-
ReplyDeleteDefinitely..hope! Thanks so much!!
Magical poem! Those people in the picture do look kind of blue-moony.
ReplyDeleteHi ~T~
ReplyDeleteThe picture really dictated the magic to me! Thanks for your insight..
Yes there is magic in your words here Lyn! Love this! :-)
ReplyDeleteHi Carrie-
ReplyDeleteSo glad that you liked this..thanks so much..