River/ Marina Moevs/ 2005
WHAT AN IMAGE from Tess, for Magpie Tales. Inspirational...
REFLECTION
The morning fog casts a haze
as thick as cataracts.
I try to place the new day
on yesterday's shoulders.
Better to stand on my head
because I don't know
top from bottom,
reverie from certainty.
The lake reflects
a pretense of clarity,
an optical illusion
that a skipping stone
deconstructs.
Is rising above it
the same as escaping?
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I try to place the new day
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I love this and the reference to cataracts. Enjoyed it.
I try to place the new day
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I wasn't sure if my other comment made it... so here I am again. Love your imagery in this poem. Nicely done.
Hi Margaret-
ReplyDeleteGratefully accept both sets of comments...thank you!
if not escaping, then progressing? I like "that a skipping stone deconstructs"
ReplyDeleteHi Caty-
ReplyDeleteI really like progressing..thank you!!
The third stanza is lovely, Lyn.
ReplyDeletelol- I feel that way many mornings and clarity comes with coffee.
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ReplyDeleteHi Laurie-
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for that cuppa...saved again! Thank you...
ha i dont know that they are the same...though i think at times we have to do both...yes the skipping stones often let us see what is really going on in our lives...smiles.
ReplyDeleteoh wow that last line LOVE IT
ReplyDeleteHi Brian-
ReplyDeleteYou are always astute..picking out themes..thank you!
Hi Suz-
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your comment..always welcome! Aren't we lucky to be "prompted"?
"To place the new day
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What we, in January 2012, are now doing.
Well expressed.
Beautiful imagery.........
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Very nice. This cast me back to a reflective moment from over four years ago (http://cosmicfart.blogspot.com/2007/06/600-am-on-bird-loud-morning-sun-on.html).
ReplyDeleteYour conclusion resonates.
Now, look what you've done ... I'm going to ponder that question all day!!!
ReplyDeleteThe skipping stone metaphor is great. Nice Magpie.
ReplyDeleteHi Berowne-
ReplyDeleteThank you...yesterday as the stepping stone..of course!
Hi Mimi-
ReplyDeleteThanks for the lovely comment...
Hi DCW-
ReplyDeleteWelcome, and so glad you enjoyed this..thanks...
Hi Helen-
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm a troublemaker from way back!! Thank you...
i like where you went with this...thanks for sharing your words
ReplyDeleteWhat a stunning poem Lyn....i love the 3rd stanza! Happy New Year!
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Hi Wayne-
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for stopping by...I appreciate it!
Hi Carrie-
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely comment, thanks so much..and the best to you, too!
Provocative and superb!
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