Sunday, May 1, 2011

OUT OF THE BLUE/ Poetry Potluck #33



THIS WEEK'S Poetry Potluck #33, presents us with the opportunity to deal with our Doubts, Fears, Inhibitions and Hesitations.  What weighs me down the most?  I hesitate to tell you...


OUT OF THE BLUE

A friend schedules a seance.
I'm the ghost.
I come through
but it's Greek to me.

That makes two of us
who wonder
what my spirit is up to.

I fear my soul
may have
a separate language,
and it's one
I do not speak.

Out of the blue
I start scattering
tittle-tattle,
revealing secrets,

and everyone
gets the message
but me,

because I still
haven't learned
the true
heart to heart
of Heaven.


copyright/ all rights reserved/ 2011


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16 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 1, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    life is a learning journey,
    you are ahead of many,
    keep the course sailing.

    Love your entry,
    A++

    :)
    Bless your talent.

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  2. HopeMay 1, 2011 at 10:03 PM

    yes, I can understand how that could be a genuine fear.  a frightening thought very well expressed! :)

    loved it!
    thank you

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  3. AnonymousMay 1, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    a truly remarkable write! thank you!

    Luna

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  4. WyomingDivaMay 1, 2011 at 11:21 PM

    You describe well that sometime- disconnect between spirit and self.

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  5. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    Nice twist on the ghost idea. like it!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/05/01/darkly-imagined/

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  6. LynMay 2, 2011 at 6:59 AM

    Hi Jingle-
    Blessings to you too, my friend! And many thanks for the opportunities...

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  7. LynMay 2, 2011 at 7:01 AM

    Hi Hope-
    Thanks for your special words!

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  8. LynMay 2, 2011 at 7:03 AM

    Hi lunawitch15-
    I'm grateful for your words..thank you!!

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  9. LynMay 2, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Hi WyomingDiva-
    Welcome and thank you..it's that disconnect that gets us!!

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  10. LynMay 2, 2011 at 7:07 AM

    Hi Jessica-
    Thank you..me and ghosts, huh??

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  11. bendedspoonMay 2, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    great write! one speaks the language of truth and I fear the other is not, from my own experience. Huggs :)

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  12. MaggieMay 2, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    What a clever write, Lyn. Loved it.

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  13. LynMay 2, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    Hi bendedspoon-
    I agree with you, and appreciate your comment...thanks...

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  14. LynMay 2, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    Hi thingy-
    So glad you did! Thanks so much!

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  15. AnonymousMay 2, 2011 at 9:11 PM

    A fantastic write and the image choice is outstanding!

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  16. LynMay 2, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    Hi abthomas-
    I really appreciate your terrific comment..thanks!!!

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